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I really tried to give it a shot and made it past chapter 60, but it seemed to be the main character suffering from memory loss just getting dragged around to complete plot points. He doesn't know anything about the world or what is going on, so by extension neither does the reader making it is difficult to enjoy. The grammar was good though I'll give the author that.

A really interesting story once you get a couple of chapters in and it starts making sense. However just as it starts getting really good all the chapters get jumbled up and out of order with some missing making it impossible to read the story. I loved the story itself, I just wish it wasn't butchered and then reassembled on this site because I can't find it complete anywhere.

I wasn't sure where the story was going within the first couple of chapters, however as I kept reading it just got better and better. The grammar was good, and the magic system was well structured and reminded me a little of lord of the mysteries but with a little bit more of a game feel.

The beginning of the story is a chore to puzzle out what it is trying to say. However, by the tie you get closer to the end of the free chapters it is interesting to see where the story is prigressing.

Really good beginning to the story. I like how he still has to struggle to improve and I'm excited to see how the world grows.

It was a very well written start to the novel

Very interesting story that is quite different from all the other ones on the site.

Wow, I was not expecting to get sucked into the story of a prison warden so quickly. it's an interesting story and I hope the author continues it.

Really interesting way of doing a time loop, where the MC doesn't actually know how to fix the past correctly and has to stumble through it.

Fun little wholesome slice of life novel. The translation is also quite readable.

This is probably the most enjoyable Cultivation novel I've read so far. The grammar is pretty good and the plot points with raising the insects are very interesting.

Interesting setup as of the first 40 chapters for a good space adventure novel. I'm excited to see where this story goes.

i really enjoy the more technical feel to the combat and training for this novel. The grammar is also really good.

Great grammar, an interesting world concept, and interesting characters. Better than the majority of books on this site.

After reading all the other reviews I'm not sure if it is just me, but the novel feels kind of bland and lifeless.

This novel is based on a good idea, and the writing quality is very good compared to other books on this site. However, it is extremely fast-paced with tech advancements and socioeconomic developments happening in the blink of an eye. I think it would be helpful for the novel to slow down and flesh out what happens to make each development and allow for some conflict and character growth to happen more naturally rather than all of the sudden.

High quality story from the first couple hundred chapters

interesting concept, but once it got into his school drama I feel like it lost a lot of steam.

The characters are really well done. One of the more promising entertainment genre novels I've read.

There was definitely a period around chapter 70 or so where the quality of the writing dropped tremendously and it was really difficult to read. but after powering through it was definitely worth it. It isn't the best story ever, but it was unique and very entertaining.