Argent_ASNC - Profile

As I wrote earlier, the character grows too quickly in every sense. It's a pity that he trains mentally (spiritually) all the time; There are virtually no scenes where he exercises. I really want to defeat him, for the way he boasts of his strength to his peers, driving them almost to depression with the gap between them. Everything else seems fine. the only thing that's annoying is your character, who in two years became strong as a Kage... at eight years old... damn, that even sounds crazy! 🤯can you hear the author! and why the hell is he pestering eight-year-old Hinata!!! She's 🤬 eight! he is a reincarnated adult in the body of a child... in short... I simply have no words to describe the idiocy of such a character. If I could give him (MS) a rating, I would give it - 0.

This lady is kind of frivolous and naive. Why the hell did she think running away from the palace to have fun was a good idea? in a country where they don’t know anyone, don’t understand the language... did they say that she is an official?! so why is she so stupid, and her servants are no better than their masters... why such a high rating! readers, do you have water in your brain?

has just received power and immediately goes into battle to show his strength. like a child. suddenly he will show how strong he is..., others may think that he is obsessed with someone. it's like in Chinese novels, the main character gains power and slaps everyone.

why not just go to another school or at least abroad. because she must understand that she will not be left alone. in a past life they finished her off while she was lying down, so what’s the problem in leaving them now? The heroine is very stupid. in my opinion, the heroine is waiting for them to come and apologize for being “blind”. the heroine is too naive.

even if there is some kind of conspiracy. There are too many misunderstandings between the main characters (they ruin everything, there are too many of them). ML, in his arrogance (given his paranoia in FL), thinking that no one will lie to him because of his status, believes those he interrogates too easily. The heroine has many personalities, couldn't she have bought herself a doctorate? Maybe I'm not expressing myself correctly, but she could get tested and get confirmation that she has a right to how she is treated. be a student of some respected specialist or introduce yourself as such. After all, this is exactly what usually happens in such novels. In short, the heroine is very fickle. You can't even call off the engagement... Was it really that hard to put on ugly makeup and be done with it? NO damn it, you have to go in all your glory to show how cool she is with her child. Or, in the end, wait until the sister marries the groom. It seems that when the heroes interact with the outside world, their IQ drops.

too much pointless chatter. It just became boring to read. grammar sucks. you read the first chapter and immediately want to throw this story to hell

in principle there are many such stories. the main thing is that it is interesting. I believe that the force should correspond to its world in which the MC appears. in the world of Attack on Titan, chakra could be used to improve reactions and strength, but not ninjutsu. we need something more realistic and at least infinite stamina. In this world, only titans are supernatural. although people are abnormally strong because they adapt.. in "Naruto", for example, you can give the MC magic because it can be passed off as a bloodline limit. for a good story, the MC must fit harmoniously into the world, even if he ends up being abnormally strong.

frankly, mediocre. the character is too arrogant, wants too much, and then suffers. you need to know the limit of your desires and strengths, so as not to be too greedy. I'm rating only because I don't like this character. just annoying.