ooh, the sheer cringe . Also, how the mc gets angry at the haughty tone of thor and then goes around introduces him with all those titles
ch 0 3 Chapter 3 There is a Thor who cannot express his anger! !
Movies · GarudaTranslation
I don't mind a harem but try to keep it small. Don't make it like catching pokemons
-If the story continues to other world it will obviously be harem. Comment here for it.
Anime & Comics · 0_Eclipse_0
Chinese names are confusing the story
ch 0 8 8. Kotetsu Isane’S Request
Anime & Comics · DZeref887
ah yes , typical translations. every character is divided into three categories: enemy,.bootlicker, girlfriend
ch 0 2 2. Now, Let You Know Why I Am Arrogant
Anime & Comics · DZeref887
Well, you can slowly try to poison him with mercury though.
meh . After transmigration, the first thing he thinks about all the wrong other people did. A little bit rushed, I would say. Also, about dark magic, there's a reason it's forbidden. Most can't handle its allure, especially without occulmency.Its a really old and boring trope of trying justifying the use of dark magic.In the time of war, it wasn't . But after war, during peaceful times ,most don't need it except for self-defence. If I'm not wrong, aurors can legally use it, though I'm not sure.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2: So I Died... huh!
Book&Literature · Yggdrasil_loki
man this is just annoying
ch 80 Three New Works
Anime & Comics · AngelicTL
As time goes on , your character arc for your mc goes downward . He just works , he simply has no emotion for anyone. He's dating jolie, and it doesn't even feel like he has many desires to the character. He feels like a robot . I feel like the author should focus on mc and his relationship development and his overall character development.
ch 228 HWI 228
Movies · pujimaki
what's with the cliffhanger? I don't mind, but it'd be prettying annoying if he keeps running his mouth and reveals something. Hate the fact that the guy is so emotional, and he's so attached to the trio. All the chapters were pretty much dialogue exchange between the mc and the trio
ch 33 Chapter 32: Occlumency?!
Book&Literature · Kitamari
Have to say , for a chapter, this was a little bit pointless. It didn't add much to the overall story . I don't know much about the tv series Oc. But if nothing changes from the original story, then this chapter didn't mean much . Anyway, thanks for the chapter.
ch 0 6 Chapter 5.
TV · BRIHUA
what a pitiful person
ch 0 4 I am really handsome
Movies · burakku
you could write some chapters dedicated to mc's training. I mean, we really haven't seen much of his training regime after coming under whitebeard . He's already fought some marine, and coupled with his past memory, he should get to training. Also, the origin of his weapon is questionable . You can go on a hunt for a good weapon as well.
ch 55 The Re-establishment Of Balance
Anime & Comics · Leo_DiAngelo
guy is really playing with fire ,huh
[I'm not sure if what Marak said should be believed. Not much is known about the Celestials, except for ancient records stating that the Celestials were present during the creation of the Multiverse. This would put the supposed 'True Demon God' at a level higher than these Celestials.]
My diary system in Marvel
Anime & Comics · TheWandaShip