1st Dungeon... Explaining about classes.... He kills about 400 slimes...*ta dah!*lvl 155 with 6k stats. *Logic isnt computing*
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Action · ADboy245
Couldnt stand to read the 1st 4 chapters. get an imagination.
ch 0 4 So It’s like New Game +?
Fantasy · AnathaShesha
Hahahahaha Steve is an idiot. I would nrver mess around with someone who can control time albeit just a couple seconds. That is literally the difference of somone reaching into their pocket and lining a muzzle up to your head.
ch 0 3 Chapter Three
Realistic · Tim_Saian
Ive skipped the past few chapters when they got arrested bc that was dumb. Seriously. A girl who wouldnt shut her mouth escalated a simple robbery into something a lot more and this guy wants to stick around with her?.. No thanks.
ch 0 3 The Underpaid nobody and the girl with no name part 3
Fantasy · Nightfall_Protocol
Why didnt he simply sell the card for millions? He needs money. Not power. With his luck points he can simply buy new cards to open. I.. am flabbergasted.
ch 0 3 108 Levels of Dragon Elephant Wisdom Technique
Eastern · I am Second Senior
I think you need to think real hard about the personalities of your MC and his interactions.
ch 0 6 Abrupt Change and Family
Urban · ApocalypseX
stop asking questions. Stop it. Stop. Stop it.
ch 0 3 Resist getting laid
Fantasy · Triad_lust
Rather than reading about what other peoples say/feel/ and how their faces look about the main character or their "class" outside of the arena. I would have rather you put more effort into explaining his enviroment/ what he was going through. ei: if the mc doesnt see or hear it. Why should we care?
ch 28 I’m Extraordinary!
Urban · dogecoin
11 year old? Sorry but have you seen a 11 year old child? They are roughly 95 lbs. They cant swing a firaxe with enough force and power to chop a human head off with no sound or attracting the attention of the thing. Also... are you making a little kid be lewd and think of women in mens terms? thats a little dumb.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1
Sci-fi · thegrandmagi
Guys like this are the literal worst.
ch 0 6 It Was Truly The Apocalypse!
Urban · D_RegalInsomniac
So does he have a family or not? My suggestion is for the writer to quit trying to play both scenarios. #1 a random person teleported into a new world will not care about the family of the person he replaced. #2 as a foster kid/orphan, caring about others is the literally last thing you try to think about as your survival comes first. Have him worried about food and a place to sleep
ch 0 2 All System Operational
Urban · ApocalypseX
He uses ChatGpt.
ch 0 1 A Lightning To Remember
Blood Type: Dragon
Fantasy · iamnaz7