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Why is he always using the lotus now? He was able to fight normally before as well. I mean i just think he could have killed them all easily anyways with spells and the astral tyrant. Is there a reason why he chose to use the lotus here?

Author, great job. You don’t really ever dissapoint, and I’m enjoying the story. I just want to give 1 constructive criticism, and that is that the modus operandi of the MC is way too similar to zatiel’s from your previous novels. I understand there being overlap in certain elements, but sometimes I’m reading the story and it just feels way to similar to everything zatiel did in the story of the magus world, to the point that if one read that story it would even be possible to confuse both characters. I’m just saying perhaps you want the character to have uniqueness and divert a little from the same path. Other than that keep up the good work.

He should fight for money lol, seems easy and has tons of potential, money + followers

It’s been great so far, there’s just one detail that bothers me. I feel there’s a plot hole concerning how the hell the Gracie family knew about Gorgo. They weren’t there and also didn’t have anyone watching when Adam and the rest fought those orcs, so how did they know?

Author just leaving a comment here because I read until this chapter to give the story a chance. I think it’s well written and has a good plot. I just truly hope that Adam will be independent at some point soon, i actually like the characters so far and enjoy him having a team of sorts. But it’s kind of lame to see him being dragged everywhere, it makes it seem as if he doesn’t really have free will, and that’s kind of depressing, no matter how cooperative Julius is. Thanks for the chapter

Why the hell did he not use the new weapon??

I was honestly super surprised by the poem. Great job author. Sincerely.

Yes, great few chapters author

So far I think the story has potential. Advice: 1. Grammar needs a bit of work to be honest, there are a bunch of mistakes that take always from the story. 2. I expected a bit more from the fight in the tutorial, it was a bit… anticlimactic. The way he killed the level 10 goblins was just too bland. That was his first fight in the book; it could have been a bit more grand in my opinion.

Hey author, great novel so far. I was wondering why you never mention him training spells or practicing his fighting style astral tyrant. Adam seems to excel at fighting but never trains now?

Gender bending? Did he become a woman or did I misunderstand?… what a shame, you should put this in the synopsis of the novel, a lot of people dislike gender bending. Good luck with the book author!