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Jesus Christ, all this just to force a meaningless romance? I'm dropping this story, goodbye

So far it has not been mentioned whether everyone has the system or just the MC, this should have been clarified in the first chapters

All this unnecessary persecution and psychopathy on the part of the students has become very annoying, I hope this ends soon because I'm about to abandon the story

The math is wrong again. The MC started with 10 troop slots at level 1 and had 250 troop slots at level 6, an increase of 48 slots per level, but when going up to level 7 he had 300 troop slots, an increase of 50 instead of 48. This is getting annoying, in basically every chapter there was a math error

He said he would buy 8 soldiers, but he bought 6 and then it is said that he bought 4 soldiers

The driving skill level is wrong, in the previous chapter it was at level 2 now it is at level 1

Jesus, did Jesse also hit his head along with his shoulder? This is extremely stupid and shameful

Jesus, it's only the first chapter and there's already a voluptuous girl blushing? I'm stopping here

"When Caecus raised his head at the sound of the beast" What?

Jesus, every time I see a protagonist start shouting the names of techniques or go crazy because of a random person, it makes me want to drop the story right away

It would be interesting if he used pistols and a scythe

Got some inspiration from Bloodborne, huh? I like that

This level of bullying is VERY forced, no one would act like this unless they were mentally unstable

Jesus, the grammar is simply painful to read. I hope it improves in the next chapter

Normally, I would have dropped the story at this point, given the recent plot developments. However, considering that the character is Gilgamesh, it's actually expected that something like this would happen soon. Good job!

Unless the protagonist is a psychopath, this is impossible

Well, that was a pretty stupid chapter, but let's see how it goes

Did he really think he could learn magic in one day? It takes humans longer than that to learn how to hold a fork, let alone learn magic

Without emotion? Are you telling me that an untrained and inexperienced teenager maintained an expressionless face the first time he killed another human being? And on top of that, multiple humans?

What a forced plot, Jesus