4.48A young man dies full of regret with his monotonous life of emptiness. He finds himself in a dark space. One thing leads to another and off on an adventure he goes. First time author here folks. Just trying my own take on a fanfic here. I'll try to post a chapter a day. Please feel free to post your criticism and opinions on the story. I'll try to incorporate everything I see and make it better.
4.89"No matter what you decide from now on...I will love you forever...You don't have to forgive me, Sasuke." Having said these words, Itachi felt himself fading away... As Itachi died however he heard a voice, sounding divine as if it was the voice of God. "Child in this life you were hard done by, despite your virtuous nature, however you will be rewarded in your next life. Not only will you be reborn, you will also keep your bloodline powers of the Mangekyo Sharingan, having access to these powers from birth." Continuing onwards the divine voice also said: "Not only this, every time you increase in your profound realm you will unlock new rewards, which can be anything from Mangekyo Sharingan abilities, either held by other Mangekyo Sharingan users, or entirely unique, or unparalleled techniques, it is up to chance each time." Following these words Itachi felt his soul seemingly moving at an incredible speed, seemingly crossing through myriad dimensions, before colliding with and entering the body of a young man, a young man named Yun Che...
Vishnu a university Student who has photographic memory is reborn as kakashi in narutounivers with the ability to absorb any bloodline and memories. --------------@-------@@@" ------ hello friends this is my first time sorry for if any language mistake if have suggestions please comment
this is my first fanfic be warned and please help me with spelling or grammar errors i got kinda ghetto writing style(by the way i spelled ghetto wrong and had to use auto correct) (it's short cuz i just started this fanfic.) read the start of the journey of newly "spawned" Ancient saiyan in a world where the strong beat down the weak and near immortals with thousands of years of battle experience, and "prodigys" walk the lands,for most this sounds unpleasant to say the least to this battle hungry saiyan however this is paradise, showing his monstrous potential and prodigious talent in progression along with inheriting techniques and his unyielding determination that defies even the Gods themselves!!. and he only wants one thing to see his limits and tear beyond them
Qi Condensation. Foundation Establishment. Golden Core. On present day 21st century Earth, just these three realms are known to be attainable. Nascent Soul is nevertheless a legend and the domains above it lost to the long waterway of time. On the planet Earth however, there is the remnant of one of the few Nascent Soul cultivators from the past, the legendary serpent Quetzalcoatl, who is suppressed underneath Macchu Picchu. Using the body of an unfortunate youth, named Ao Xisu, who possessed an incredible bloodline, the bloodline of human sovereign Fuxi, Quetzalcoatl plans to return the world, with even greater talent than before and an even more incredible body, ready to rock the world and once more ascend to Nascent Soul, and perhaps even further! Taking the name of the boy who's body he possesses, Quetzalcoatl once more rejoins the world of cultivation, millenia after his initial suppression, using the name Ao Xisu, ready to cause incredible waves, however little did he know that his rebirth unto the world once more would take him further into the universe than he could have ever imagined... Into the vast universe where he would encounter far more incredible cultivators and lands than he ever thought possible! (The universe outside of earth, which will only be encountered after the first 50 or so chapters is a combination of the ATG universe, Martial God Asura universe and the Er Gen verse, ie Renegade Immortal, Pursuit of the Truth, I Shall Seal the Heavens etc, however elements of these stories will still be present on earth in the first 50 chapters)
To struggle against the heavens is the way that man has embarked upon since the dawn of time, however what lies above the heavens? Raimon is a young boy born into a small tribe of mortals, the Bone Tribe, a tribe situated in the Endless Wilds, a stretch of wilderness so vast that no one in their tribe has ever managed to reach the edge and leave the wilderness. Raimon's sole ambition is to escape the wilds and become like the men and women in the stories passed down by the Tribe Elders, embarking on the path of cultivation! However, when Raimon's tribe is eradicated by a beast tide and he is forced to flee, eventually being forced to dive into an underground cave system in the process, Raimon is thrust onto a different path, a path which very few have ever walked. For in the underground cave system Raimon came across a seed and a scripture each placed on a separate pedestal, the Seed of Myriad Lives and the Endless Wilds Sutra, according to the inscriptions on the pedestals. These two objects caused Raimon to embark on a path unseen for billions upon trillions upon untold amounts of years, the so called path of the Immortal Mortal...
Six Paths to reincarnation. Hungry Ghost, Asura, God, Demon, Myriad Self, Mortal. Only a select few on Earth would ever achieve the requisite karma over their myriad reincarnations to undergo a mutation to gain a Six Paths soul, and upon doing so they would be able to select one or more of the paths to gain that path or paths' unique ability in their next life, depending on how much karma they gained during their lives. Xi Lu had lived a contented life on Earth however he died in a freak car accident when he was 20. Shockingly in this last life he had supposedly managed to accumulate the final bit of karma needed to gain a Six Paths soul, and not only that he had accumulated enough to gain four paths' abilities! Armed with these advantages Xi Lu reincarnated into one of the other 3000 Lower realms, the Sinflame realm, with the Earth having been the lowest of the 3000 realms where the Qi was too sparse for cultivation to take place. Armed with his incredible talents bestowed upon him by his Six Paths soul and the four paths' abilities that Xi Lu was able to select as a result, Xi Lu began his journey, determined to find out the secrets behind the Six Paths reincarnation from Earth and in doing so, ascending to true supremacy in the wider universe of cultivation which had been revealed to him.
Tian Y'Li was the last Daoist to cultivate the path of the Immortal Dao on planet Earth, having reached the peak of the Great Sea stage, just a step away from Immortal Ascension, however the Qi on Earth had declined too far to the point that Tian Y'Li could only live out the remainder of his years yearning for a way to achieve immortal ascension but unable to do so. At the age of 10,027, Tian Y'Li passed away in meditation peacefully in the year 2020. With his dying breath Tian Y'Li's only regret was his inability to even attempt immortal ascension, not because of his own lack of ability, but because of the limitations of his own world. Xi Nong Su is a poor mortal youth part of a now declined clan, the Xi Nong Clan, living in destitution on a small island within the Southern Sea of the Sui Xi Nong Divine Continent, however he sought to change his fate by attempting the annual trial for the Nine Li Sect, entering their ship when it passed his island. However, upon entering the ship his heart was pierced by the Nine Li Sect disciples who tossed him onto a pile of corpses made up of at least hundreds if not thousands of bodies. His last feeling was not one of regret for being unable to help his clan, or a fear of imminent death, rather it was rage, a burning rage so intense it seemed as if his very blood itself was on fire. Yet Xi Nong Su, whose heart had been pierced through and tossed onto a pile of corpses by the so called immortal cultivators of the Nine Li Sect, woke up, yet inside his head, inside his consciousness, there appeared to be a second voice. "I, Tian Y'Li, Saint of the Heming Mountain on Earth and one of the forefathers of Daoism, appear to have been reincarnated with my memories into this body, and have fused with your soul, becoming one with you." To have been pierced through the heart and then wake up not only not dead, but very much alive with 10,000 years worth of memories suddenly fused into your soul is not something easy to deal with, especially when you gain the owner of those memories' soul along with them, however little did Xi Nong Su know that this was the beginning of a journey that would change his fate forever, a journey that would mark the beginning of his and Tian Y'Li's ascent on the path of the Dao! Xi Nong Su and Tian Y'Li support each other, and during their Immortal Ascension they fuse to form a new being, becoming neither Xi Nong Su, or Tian Y'Li, and referring to their new existence as Xi Tian Seb. Eventually Xi Tian Seb reaches the peak of the 2nd step with a perfect foundation, and begins his preparations to create a perfect Dao Painting to enter the 3rd step among the Nine Dao Sky. The story begins here, with Xi Tian Seb living in seclusion amongst mortals on one of the myriad planets in the Nine Dao Sky, painting his Dao Painting.
Life started in The Pit billions upon trillions of years ago, the exact point long lost in the river of time. Those who died in The Pit found themselves reincarnated onto the planet Earth, where they would live for 9 lives before returning to The Pit for 1 life, before repeating the cycle. However, in The Pit there was a chance to break this cycle, at the age of 8 everyone would awake a heavenly essence affinity, with one of the 99 known heavenly essences. They would be able to sense the energy, the intrinsic natural Qi, of their respective heavenly essence and its forms around the world, for example if one possessed an affinity with fire they would be able to sense Fire Qi, or if one possessed an affinity with pain, Pain Qi. Through deepening their affinity with and understanding their respective heavenly essence people were able to better themselves, cultivate themselves into beings beyond mere mortals, they were able to create their own daos based off their unique understanding of their essences, and even discover new levels of The Pit! There are 3 realms of cultivation known to those in The Pit, the Man realm, the Earth realm, and finally the Heaven realm, each of which correspond to their respective layers, the Man layer, Earth layer and Heaven layer. One can only reach the next layer once they achieve a breakthrough, with one needing to breakthrough from the Man realm to the Earth realm to sense the entrance to the Earth layer, and then the Earth realm to the Heaven realm to sense the entrance point to the Heaven layer, with their lifespan increasing exponentially with each respective breakthrough, going from 100 years to 1,000 years when one reaches the Man realm, and increasing by a factor of ten with each respective breakthrough. Of the 47 billion people on the Man layer of the pit, 97% of these people will automatically enter the Man realm at the age of 8 when their heavenly essence spirit awakens, however 3% of people will remain as mortals, with no hope of breaking through in their life, destined to die in The Pit after 100 years and return to the Earth for another 9 cycles of life there trapped as a mortal. When born in The Pit, a person retains only the memories of their 1st and 9th life on Earth, with the other lives remaining hidden. Seb, an ordinary mortal from Earth in his 9th life, died at the age of 105 after living a happy and prosperous life, however upon reaching The Pit he was born into the Slums of Bemir, one of the absolute worst areas in the entire Man layer, crawling with disease, famine and general chaos, an area where laws and morality seemed to have been abandoned. Upon being born in The Pit as an orphan, Seb relied on his memories from his 1st life as the greatest martial artist from China during his time, Seven Poisons Mo Qin, to survive in the Slums of Bemir, however when he reached 8 years of age Seb didn't awaken a heavenly essence spirit. Unresigned to his fate, after another 3 years of killing and slaughtering in the Slums of Bemir, Seb set out into the wider world of The Pit at the young age of 11, on a journey to find a way to reach the Man realm despite his lack of a heavenly essence spirit, determined to do what had been deemed impossible by the citizens of The Pit and change his own fate! And so Seb began a journey, a journey that would bring holy pain to the world...
"Well, its all over now..." Having said these words, Xu Te felt himself fading away... As Xu Te died however he heard a voice, sounding divine as if it was the voice of God. "Child in this life you were hard done by, despite your virtuous nature, however you will be rewarded in your next life. You will be reborn in an alternate universe, similar to your current one in base structure, yet with more advanced beings, who have already stepped on the path of cultivation." Following these words Xu Te felt his soul seemingly moving at an incredible speed, seemingly crossing through myriad dimensions, before colliding with and entering the body of a young man, a young man named Seb Daynight who like Xu Te had recently died... Taking over this young man's body Xu Te did not realise that this was the start of a grand journey, a journey that would take him into the stars and beyond! ********************************************************** (Set in the universe of Star Odyssey, a really good novel on Wuxiaworld, which if you like this I recommend checking out)