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  • Falling for the Bad Boy in the Reverse Harem Game [BL]

    Falling for the Bad Boy in the Reverse Harem Game [BL]

    LGBT+ R18 SYSTEM COMEDY SUPERPOWERS ISEKAI BL YAOI LOVETRIANGLE BADBOY SHOWBIZ

    4.76

    The debuting singer Takeda Haruki would never believe he’d fall for a drawing. And it's a drawing of a guy out of all things! But when he finds himself dragged into a girl's harem game, Haruki soon finds out the drawing doesn't just live on paper and in his dreams, but in reality too! And he's still just! As! Attractive!Six handsome men wake up inside an experimental girl’s otome game, against their will.They’ll discover leaving is much harder than they think, but they have no intention of following the game rules!"Down with the system! We're on strike!"It's probably the only escape plan ever that involves so many alpha men pretending to be gay. But are they really pretending? Can fake love become real? And is that a love triangle in the distance?Find out now! Unlock the secret route of insanity, smut, and Haruki's true ending!COMPLETED NOVEL*****SMUT SCENES!SILLY AND LIGHT-HEARTED NOVEL, NOT ANGSTY!*****Hello, it's my first story! Please support this novel with votes and reviews. English is not my first language, feedback is appreciated!Se você lê em Português, procure no site por 'Crush pelo Bad Boy do Otome'.HinataPerolada

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  • Reincarnated Into A Dead Woman's Body In Another World

    Reincarnated Into A Dead Woman's Body In Another World

    Fantasy ADVENTURE REINCARNATION MAGIC MYSTERY DARK TRANSMIGRATION ISEKAI YURI LIGHTNOVEL SINGLEFEMALELEAD

    4.97

    "CRASH!" the last sound he heard; the last image being the smile of his friends. Jotou Howllett, a twenty-one year old nobody who finds little to no purpose in his life, wants to be a freelancer to make it big whilst trying to avoid education. He spends his last day of freedom with his friends before he's forced by his parents to attend college. That last day became his true last day as a white light flashed and he opened his eyes in a coffin, suffocating. He, now she, found herself to be in the body of a woman who had recently passed away. Jotou comes to realize that she's no longer in her world and now is in some sort of fantasy world. The rampant problems in this world soon find themselves surrounding Jotou, from the magics to the monsters to the wars between kingdoms and cities. Jotou sets out to uncover how she got here, why is she here, is she stuck here? Alongside the companions she finds in her way. _ Join the Discord Community for extra info about spells, magic, the world, announcements and more! : https://discord.gg/NPxPJZKamz _ Here's the map of the world!: https://imgur.com/a/krMRCCX Follow along on her journey through this new world, an isekai anime style story written the way I would love to read myself. It's set in an industrial revolution-esque era with magics and inconsistent technologies as a result. From slice of life moments to dark moments; comedy, fantasy, darkness, romance, mystery and reincarnation all rolled up into one adventure and I do hope anyone reading this has fun and enjoys the journey that's crafted! I intend to go by arcs and chapters much like a light novel. If you would like to give me any feedback about my writing or just want to appreciate my work, you can always leave a comment, a review or a power stone or leave feedback in the Discord! Any support is appreciated. My Links: Email: eletro104@gmail.com Reddit: u/Eletro_101 Twitter: @eletro101 Discord Community for this Book: https://discord.gg/NPxPJZKamz

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  • Awakened As A Dungeon Core?

    Awakened As A Dungeon Core?

    4.12

    What happens when a normal man awakens in a world of magic and monsters? What if he awakens as a gemstone that can't move, eat, or communicate but is somehow alive? What happens when this stone learns to cast magic and create rooms, to bring life to monsters of its own and defend itself from invaders? This is the story of that mans journey from a small one room tunnel to a magnificent challenge to the universe. Chapters range from 1k-1.5k words usually! First time writing this type of novel but always wanted to try so any feedback helps! Also below is my patreon! Most things to influence my novel are free but by subscribing to it you help me afford more time to write instead of working two jobs as well as to commission artists to turn my monsters and manic dream creatures into reality! https://patreon.com/user?u=71062598

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  • New World New Life

    New World New Life

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE SYSTEM MAGIC TRANSMIGRATION SHAPESHIFTER

    4.63

    What would you do if you woke up in a forest with no memories?Would you cower in fear, or explore the strange new world?Join Vyrena on her journey through Gaeia as she tries to figure out her mysterious past! With the voice in her head named Dotty, she will make friends, enemies, gain new powers and become the greatest warrior she could ever be!Will she find out who she was before? What will the new world bring? Join her journey and find out! Will she find a dash of romance along the way? She just might!_____________________________________________________________"Where am I?" Vyrena asked herself.The girl tried to move her body, but all of her muscles and bones ached. Her throat was as dry as the desert, she needed water. In the near distance, Vyrena could hear the sound of moving water. Gathering all of her strength, she crawled inch by inch towards the water source.Upon reaching the riverbank, she quenched her thirst greedily. It tasted clear and refreshing, a good sign. She could feel the dirt and grime that covered her entire body. Unable to bear it anymore, Vyrena dunked herself into the water.The cool refreshing feel of the river water jolted her senses. As she emerged from the water, she could finally open her eyes and take in her surroundings.-How did I end up here?- she thought to herself.She tried to remember what she could. Memories flashed through her mind.- I died -The realisation shocked her to the core. Her eyes were wide open. Recalling the details made her head spin.She recalled drinking a substance and laying down in her bed. A familiar hand held onto hers, his words echoed in her mind.-I'm here for you. I'm here for you.-But as soon as that memory faded, new memories from the host body bombarded her. When the recollection of memories was complete, a voice popped up in her mind._____________________________________________________________I hope you enjoy the story! If you love it or maybe not, give me some feedback in the comments or in a review! All feedback will be greatly appreciated~As of 20th June 2021, is completed, thank you for everyones' support. I will likely write a sequel in the future. PS: The current cover was commissioned from the amazing @balqizu on Instagram! Thank you so much for bringing them to life! T^T Join my discord server: https://discord.gg/hYdy6uUCome chat with me on Discord at ValestriaMoon#9724!A huge thank you to everyone who supported me in posting my novel XD you know who you are~

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  • Becoming a Monster

    Becoming a Monster

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE R18 SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG DARK SURVIVAL APOCALYPSE EVOLUTION

    3.57

    No one knew that the stories they read of fantasy creatures and legends would now become their source of hell. Follow Noah during humans biggest and maybe last crisis yet as he finally found a reason to live which may also leave him losing his humanity. Feedback is definitely appreciated, good or bad, lets make the story good together. I will like to note that the main character isn’t completely ruthless like some of you may want. There’s a lot of stories out there with ruthless, bloodthirsty, cold hearted main characters so if that’s what your interest in then I’m sorry to disappoint you.

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  • Beneficial Union: Chasing A Rogue Wife

    Beneficial Union: Chasing A Rogue Wife

    Fantasy ROMANCE REINCARNATION WEAKTOSTRONG CULTIVATION ARRANGEDMARRIAGE

    4.67

    Without even a name in her past life, she managed to escape her lifelong imprisonment and transmigrated to the wasted body of a noble’s daughter. Does she mind? No! As long she can fulfill her greatest desires; freedom, treasures, and food. Crawling out from the abyss to claim her freedom, snatching treasures to her heart’s desire; To get what she wants, she has no choice but to grab ahold of the chance to take a wealthy husband. Will she be able to control him? Or will he control her?Husband: Afraid? Are you thinking of backing out after agreeing to the bet? Wife: Who’s afraid?! I will empty your treasury! Husband: Oh? You just need to warm my bed every night and the treasury will be yours... Wife:..... (considering the offer)...................................Author's note: Disclaimer: Ongoing editingThank you so much for checking out my story. This can be a long one so I am trying to update more than 2 chapters daily, though anything more is a bonus.This is also a stand-alone story and the first book of a series, so rest assured, there will an ending. :-) Sorry in advance as well for some grammar issues. Still working on editing.Constructive and reasonable feedback and suggestions are fine too. Hope you guys enjoy! :-)

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  • Hot Coffee

    Hot Coffee

    Urban R18 CEO POSSESSIVE FAMILY ABANDONED RICHFAMILY

    4.78

    Have you ever been involved with your boss? Are you clumsy? Have you ever poured Hot Coffee in you're boss? If you answered "Yes" to atleast (2) two of these questions then you might be able to relate to our Female Lead, Marianna Catalina Rodriguez. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Marianna had embarked on a new journey in life working for the young Mr. Martinez who is notoriously known for his hot temper. Although Mr. Martinez's temper is hot do you know what is more hot? Thats right the hot coffee spilled all over him on the first day on Ms. Rodriguez's employment. But what is this? She isn't fired but promoted? What could possibly be the reason? A change of heart or just the main motive of getting in her pants? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ There is only one way to find out and its by following along with the story of Marianna and Mr. Martinez.All work of fiction. Any real life events and people resemblance are all of pure coincidence. Leave comments and give feedback if you like. You can also follow me on ig. Ig and discord are both on my profile. Thank you for giving my story a chance and happy reading.•||☆2nd book of this series☆||•

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  • Only I Can See The End

    Only I Can See The End

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG OVERPOWERED TRANSMIGRATION VILLAIN APOCALYPSE

    4.67

    Mikey has been having dreams (nightmares) every night, for the past ten years. His dreams tread the realm beyond the ordinary, showing Dungeons, Monsters, magic-like occurrences, and the literal end of the world. But, what happens when the dreamer wakes up, only to find out that the things he has been seeing in these nightmares have started to appear in reality? Now faced with an inevitable fate that draws closer, Mikey must do all he can to ensure the grim future he witnessed doesn’t occur. For the sake of himself, and everyone he grows to care about, he must. “… Win or die trying!” * * * NOTE: While there is a Villain tag, the Novel doesn't start off with the MC being a morally bad person. Please keep that in mind as you read. Also, I'd really appreciate feedback from you readers. I'll take what I can get. Thanks

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  • The Mischievous Maiden & The Sleeping Prince

    The Mischievous Maiden & The Sleeping Prince

    History REINCARNATION MYSTERY DARK TRAGEDY HISTORICAL ROYALFAMILY LOVETRIANGLE PRINCESS FORBIDDENLOVE

    4.77

    A runaway maiden finds herself entangled in a tale of horror when she saves the Bride of a prince from a Haunted Castle. --- WARNING: HEAVY SUPERNATURAL ELEMENTS, GORE, DISTURBING THEMES, SLOW-BURN ROMANCE, RICH-IN-STORY NOVEL! I hope you like this story. If you wish, please support this tale by voting, rating, and commenting. Your feedback on typos or bad grammar is welcomed and appreciated.

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  • My Last Apocalypse

    My Last Apocalypse

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION MYSTERY CULTIVATION DARK SURVIVAL GENIUS APOCALYPSE RIGHTEOUS

    I can't explain why or how this cycle repeats for me. Yet, what I do understand is each time I die, I return to the starting point, a zombie apocalypse, and continue my journey anew.In my first apocalypse, I overlooked the creeping signs of doom until overrun by zombies in my flat, where I perished in sheer terror.The second attempt to alert others of the impending chaos fell on deaf ears; labelled a lunatic, I fled the city, only to succumb to starvation and exposure alone in the wild.By the third go, I sought safety in wealth, collecting vast supplies, yet fell victim to a brutal gang.Now, understanding the key—precise foresight, survival skills, strict secrecy, and solitude—I see the purpose in reliving this collapse. This time, failure is not an option. This time, I will survive and outlive the apocalypse.***[UPDATED DAILY MON-FRI + SOMETIMES ON THE WEEKENDS]Welcome to my novel! This marks my debut work on WebNovel. I hope you enjoy it, and I always welcome your feedback.

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  • reincarnated as deku with feedback

    reincarnated as deku with feedback

    Akira ido is reincarnated as deku with feedbacks powers this is my first fanfiction so give feedback please

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  • Ghost Rider in Twilight/TVD/TO

    Ghost Rider in Twilight/TVD/TO

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE REINCARNATION COMEDY HAREM OVERPOWERED TWILIGHT GHOST HUNT

    3.41

    Shiva was a 28-year-old teenager who died in a car crash and was reborn with the power of Ghost Rider in the Twilight and TVD (The Vampire Diaries) world. . . . Arthur's Note: My grammar may not be the best, but I'm working on improving it. I don't own any of the characters, only my original character (OC). I would appreciate feedback and support if you enjoy the story. I will be updating it three to four days a week.

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  • My Plunderer System

    My Plunderer System

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE SYSTEM WEAKTOSTRONG SUPERPOWERS LEVELUP VIDEOGAME APOCALYPSE ADVANCEDTECHNOLOGY MMORPG

    4.26

    In the year 2097, humanity faced a new terror. Cities were destroyed by horrible monsters that came through the dimensional doors. To counter this new terror, humans began to awaken magical abilities and dove into the gates to destroy the oncoming waves of beasts. One student in particular became orphaned due to one of these dimensional doors. He was considered one of the weakest, and was bullied due to his inability protect himself. While being beaten up in an alley one day, the area went into chaos as a dimensional door opened, trapping him and others inside. He was face to face with death when a sudden beam of light came down. "Is this how I die?" the student thought. Waking up in a hospital later, his wounds were healed as if they were never there in the first place, and a strange screen was appearing in his vision... "Welcome to the Plunderer System" Follow Milo Fenix as he uses the system to fight back against his enemies; his weak old self, the beasts, even humans. Will he achieve his goal of becoming the strongest? Will he be able to overcome his past self as someone who was weak? Will he be able to protect the ones he cares about? Find out by reading My Plunderer System. . . . First ever time trying to write a novel so any feedback you have is greatly appreciated :) -Kowatch24

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  • Hundredfold Feedback System: The Emperor and his invincible wifes!

    Hundredfold Feedback System: The Emperor and his invincible wifes!

    Fantasy ROMANCE R18 SYSTEM HAREM CULTIVATION VILLAIN

    [No Virgin+Villain protagonist+Strong Wife+Emperor+Low-Key] Standing on top of the Palace of Heaven overlooking all living beings his hand behind his back with severals powerful empress next to him Jin Yi said softly: "Low-key is prosperity this is my Dao!"(The image does not belong to me and if there is a problem I will not hesitate to remove it.)

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  • New Life as a Futanari Tentacle Girl

    New Life as a Futanari Tentacle Girl

    Fantasy REINCARNATION R18 SYSTEM MAGIC ISEKAI NONHUMAN YURI

    4.66

    This will be the first time writing something. I'm going to take all genres I like and try force them together. The MC gets reincarnated into a world of swords and magic. Start of the novel will be character and setting introduction, and later MC will travel around. R18 chapters will naturally come later... nevermind, the whole story is R18. First few chapters are just her building her 'character'. [R18 Tags] Harem | NSFW | Domination | Threesome | Foursome | Tentacle | Futa on Female | Female on Futa | Futanari | Incest | Anal | Sex | Choking | Humiliation | Lolicon Dis*cord https://disc*rd.gg/QPK42eMnUw replace the * with a o I am open to feedback and hope you enjoy.

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  • Rubik’s Man: I’m Rich & You’re Dead

    Rubik’s Man: I’m Rich & You’re Dead

    Action ACTION ROMANCE R18 SYSTEM MAGIC HAREM VILLAIN WEREWOLF KILLER URBAN

    Smoke Pac, a top gangster of Clown City fell to the lower rung of the criminal ladder and became a sewage rat left for dead. He was betrayed and brutally killed by his former mafia associates. During his death, he accidentally awakened the mysterious powers of the Rubik's Cube System. With his new lease on life and newfound powers, he vowed to regain his title as number one Crime Lord of Clown City while relishing in his sweet-sweet revenge. Authors Note: Feel free to share your feedback, drop a comment, leave a review and big thanks to everyone who supports this story. Here are my other books on Webnovel: 1. The Jamaican Blur: Island Superheroes! [ https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-jamaican-blur-island-superheroes!_27279642105011205 ] AuthorsDread Contacts: https://linktr.ee/authorsdread https://www.patreon.com/AuthorsDread Twitter: https://twitter.com/Authors_Dread Discord: https://discord.gg/MMqjgX4dRd

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  • Lycan's Sin

    Lycan's Sin

    Fantasy R18 SYSTEM MAGIC CULTIVATION WEREWOLF POWERFULCOUPLE SEDUCTIVE FORBIDDENLOVE GETTINGBACKTOGETHER WOMENSWORLD

    A powerful tale of love and vengeance. When the person who you have sworn to kill turns out to be your lover. It's hard to forgive when wounds run so deep. You can't help when love runs Its course after years of hate. Will they give in to their desires or be the enemies the fate had made them be. I need feedback guys good or bad. You can bash me on my grammar and spelling mistakes so I may fix it Love and hugs Author

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  • High King

    High King

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG DEVIL MYTH RAREBLOODLINE WIZARDS ANGEL

    4.47

    Come and read the tale of Desmond Murphy, as he recounts the story of how he went from a 25 year old office worker nobody, to the High King of Hell. Follow along as he is thrust against his will from his boring day to day office life into one of gods, magic and mystery. Stuck in a plot between Heaven and Hell, Desmond is forced to forge new relationships with demons and other unlikely mythological creatures while he struggles to understand the rules of this new world revealed to him. Will he survive Heaven’s angels that pursue his bloody end? *********** This is my first original work, please read and review if you like. Feedback is greatly appreciated! I still work a full time job, but do my best to update at least every M/F *********** Update 7/17/2022 This work is on a hiatus for a few months. My wife had twins recently, and I overestimated my available time to write. (So exhausted all the time!) so I will resume once my newly grown family gets into a new groove and the twins are old enough for me to get SOME amount of sleep again. (Hoping for early September!) Thank you to everyone supporting this novel and please note that I WILL be returning. That is a promise!

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  • Transmigrate inside a Web Novel as a Side Character.

    Transmigrate inside a Web Novel as a Side Character.

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE SYSTEM WEAKTOSTRONG HAREM SUPERPOWERS TRANSMIGRATION ACADEMY DRAGON

    On his way home from a part-time job, A college student named Soma found himself falling asleep on the bus he rode. However, after he woke up from his slumber. He found a single email from the Author Chronicles Saga series he has been reading, for the past year and the content from the email was {..YOU are inside the novel I wrote.. "Huh?". "..Now I will give you a chance to save that favorite heroine of yours, yourself. The decision is yours to make, how will you handle it?(Smirk). I hope you can do it, hehehe(Wink). Now for the last, I hope you can experience and enjoy yourself, and live however you like in a world that I created. Sincerely from Side_Author} “...Is this for real?”. Follow Soma’s story inside the novel world he transferred into as a Side character that will overthrow the story and the world, with his reliable comrades. *** Author's note: This was My first book. I hope you can enjoy the series I wrote. Also, sorry in advance. English is not my first language so I think you guys would find some misspelled words or grammar mistakes, I hope you can tolerate it. I welcome any suggestion/feedback that will help me grow as an Author.

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  • Blood Lust: The Midnight Resort

    Blood Lust: The Midnight Resort

    Fantasy VAMPIRE BEAUTY CEO POSSESSIVE SEDUCTIVE COOLGUY

    4.77

    Hiraya has always known that she had special skills that were quite strange. Imagine her surprise then when an infamous aristocrat chooses her from the many talents of the Midnight Resort’s Mediterranean Branch to be exclusively his due to these mysterious capabilities. Marion is not the typical multi-billionaire businessman. His family history is of regal stature and has a long history of power and prestige. However, he also holds a dark secret that needs a unique and special woman to solve. And he is intent on making her his by buying her from the Resort. Neither one of them wanted to fall in love. Yet they did… And that’s when they realize this might be the death of them. +++ Like it ? Add to library!Also, you can give feedback,stones or stars. :)

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