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Hello lovelies. I'm back with list of short stories. Will be slowly updating since I'm quite busy. All the short stories will be around 3-4 chapters.
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The writing quality is not bad and improving gradually with the chapters, but still there are some noticeable mistakes. The plot is good. Keep it up!
You need to improve on your writing quality. Errors here and there but its good. Nice story line. I hope you get better and dont drop the story. Keep it up
The story is great so far.Although the updates were quite less at first.But as i continue reading waiting for your updates is quite worth it because it feels so nice just to live in your world.
As a part of review swap, I've read this novel until the last updated chapter. Writing Quality: 3.8/5 Well reading the whole book so far, it feels like your writing quality has improved from the previous chapters but there's still a lot of scope for improvement. Stability of Updates: 5/5 Works for me. Story Development: 4.5/5 The story is moderately paced which is a good thing. It's neither too fast nor slow. Character design: 4/5 A little more work could be done on the way the characters are portrayed. World Background: 4.4/5 Quite nicely shown the things around but needs a little work. The overall feel was moderate. It wasn't bad to be in your world. Keep it up author.
It's a different sort of story. Initially, I had trouble catching up on what was happening, but overall, it's a good story. Writing Quality: It's decent, and one can understand the content itself. IT has also gradually improved as the chapters go by. However, I'd advice Author to break down the paragraphs more. Having so many sentences (especially with dialogue) can make it look rather messy. Also, it's nice if there is spacing after a fullstop. Eg: (1) Here. Then start. (2) Instead of: Here.Then start. Stability of Updates: 5* out of good faith. Story Development: It's progressing nicely. A little bit of mystery and a whole lot of violence, amidst all sorts of feelings. Character Design & World Background: Adequate, though perhaps you could flesh out the characters more. As in, describe their thoughts or feelings, so that one can get more personal with the characters. All in all, a story that has potential. All the best, Author!