A different SpiderMan in MCU AU

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BingeFics

Binge_review Writing Quality: 4/5. Biased cuz I am not a big fan of 1st person pov. Imo, 3rp person pov gives more space for us to write and makes the story more engaging, however, every author has his own style. Not complaining. Stability Of Updates: 5/5. Regular updates is what everyone wants. Story Development: 4.5/5. The story pacing is alright. We are only at chapter 18, so not much can be said, but yeah, I have high hopes from this fanfic. Character Design: 4/5. This is the only thing that I think needs improvement. I know you want a cold OP Mc, but I would recommend using more vocabulary(?) and go with 'show, not tell' approach (cutting the guards in two halves is not enough.) World Background: 5/5. There's no point in giving lower rating in this part. Marvel is like the ocean and this fanfic is a cruise. It's up to you, as the author, to sail through this, and it's up to us to enjoy our time. final thoughts: I read that you are going to make changes in the timeline. I only hope that things don't get entangled. Playing with timeline in fanfics is risky because the chances of plot holes is very high. Overall: 4.6/5 Thank you for this fanfic. You are doing a great job.

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grigrait

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DaoistuPWnIK

This work is complete sh1t!!! It is not logical and not real at all. You'd better to drop it. Sorry for being rude...............................,.............................

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Endless_Suffering

My poor poor braincells 😭 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Wraith_Widow

love the fanfic. don't know why there is one hater who doesn't explain what's wrong with it but oh well. love everything about it so far keep up the good work.

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sokk

It's only 3 chapter's in but in those 3 chapter's i see good potential in this fan fic I hope you don't mess this shit up man with a edgy **** mc I want a mature mc who is mentally strong but a bit depressed but is not some dark edgy bitch that feels like the world owns him something,he got a second chance with superpowers so he should be a little grateful

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DogeLuvReadin

The Spelling is pretty bad and the overall organization of the story is bad, mostly because their are like three chapters wher they should be deleted or be in the Auxillary chapters. The plot is interesting but I feel like I barely know the MC, before and after his transmigration. Overall this story is good and unpredictable with all the different plot lines mixed in.

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Kit_0685

you should get the venom of the goliath bord eating spider because there hairs actually cause irritation and itching so just enhance that and make it off and on

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WoofWoof

this is some advanced confusion crap geammar mumbo jumbo with selective reading where you just ignore and move past the $%\^| .

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JOKER_JAY

This story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will go on, so please keep up the good work that is this story.

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Cham_Dubouzet_5006

It's decent, but i would pass atm, in DC or MCU i dislike when MC join Hero Organization, it makes the plot follow the Canon and i fell those Hero Organization are the enabler of Villainy

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Maurz

This is very difficult to read. Painful even. .................................................................................................

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UhVise_Necro

Not many chapters but a good story i hope you keep it up

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Tam132

danggood .

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MYTH_

I love this Fan-Fic and I love the author his writing quality is better than other Fan-Fics and the frequency of the updates is great. The story is somewhat different than the other fics which is great so thank you author for writing this 😊.

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VladimierDraculTem

just perfect. A good read and awesome content, just a little short. not chapters no the whole book it went by so fast that i didnt even notice finishing it!!!!!

Hello from Russia. You write well. The work is interesting and well written. Thank you for your efforts do not give up the main thing. I'm a fan of yours

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grigrait

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KevinZ_156

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