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The Second Son Of Omniman
4.18 (22 เรตติ้ง)
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What if Mark wasn't omnimans only son, what if this second son was loyal to his father. And maybe just maybe omniman may not betray his people.
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The writing quality definitely needs work but readable for the most part. The MC CRAVES for Omni Man's attention and the author said it was caused by his past life's trauma. It's really not that flashed out, imo. Why? It's because we have to look through the comments to truly understand why and not in the actual story. The MC doesn't really have any character development and from what I could tell from the author, it'll most likely not gonna happen. However, hopefully the author proves me wrong on that. Now, let's talk about updating stability. The author has pretty much made 5 chapters that's not actually related to the story and most of them, him ranting about haters. Of course, you're gonna get haters and people who likes your story. However, be the better person and prove them through YOUR own writing in stories and not argue with them. Arguing with people online is pretty much useless and will only get you frustrated. Some people are gonna write bad things about your work and when other people realize the things you've improved on, they'll most likely defend you. Now, that is a better feeling than calling people out just because they've been pestering you.
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Most accurrate evaluation . I was unable to continue due to the bad writting and the lack of " immersion " . I felt like I was reading a coment of someone bored. I don't feel the sensation of seing it happen in front of me . Maybe other people might like it but I cannot continue.
I don't think I will be reading any more from this guy not just cause of this story cause it's actually alright but the way that this person handles things is horrible he can't take any kind of criticism or hate comments and when he gets he posts 4 times in a day ranting on how he will drop it Rating 2.8 stars
clearly i love it the writing is neat and concise the character development so far in two chapter is great im hoping it gets even better as you keep writing also just seeing where your going with it it has a lot of potential and im really enjoying it so much that i cant wait for the next chapter keep up the good work
there is a omniman what else do you need? apdfjdsoslaoslldkfnfjgropapspzpzlxxcmcnnfnjfirospslzlzzlzlxcjgjfomsosndosnsdodnsodndodjdd
I appreciate your hard work that you are doing to produce a novel that we declare that we love, despite some of the critics who do not concern you with them. Do your work and I advised you to focus on two novels and add a lot of incidents instead of rushing and delving into one chapter by making it rich in words with me following from (Morocco).
The author is improving his writing it seems which is ok. The only problem I have is in the early chaps when the Trauma the MC supposedly had has no explaination. Not to mention the way he loves his father was getting a little creepy at first. Overall it could be better but still a good read imo.
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I've only seen the invincible series and did some research ... 1. the writing is pretty bad but can be fixed 2. the first chapter is a bit confusing 3. the scenarios are not well planned (the mc will be a "loyal" viltrumite ? "
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i wont sugercoat it dude your writing quality can be improved but that and your updates are my only complaint wish you could update more hope you dont give up writing just remember there are people that enjoy your novel good luck
well this is sort of a spoiler if you havent read the comics of invincible but . . . . . . . . . . . . . . mark isnt omni mans only son when he left earth in the last episode he went to a planet and had a son with a alien woman