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Forsaken's Redemption

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นักเขียน: ariam_N_M

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"Redemption is earned, not given." A mantra drilled into her mind for a long time. Suffering in the hands of her fellow human beings, she slowly grows to believe the tragic mantra and concludes...."human beings do not deserve to be saved. "However, this all changes when she makes her first daring decision which shines a light into her life. Learning that not all humanity is evil and learning to love once more, therefore gaining the strength to save her race. She will learn the most important truth; "Redemption is for all. The light of life is for all."

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ariam_N_M

Hi readers! Welcome to my book! It will start of abit slow with dash mystery so if you enjoy,please don't forget to rate and comment. Your feedback helps me to improve my writting.😄

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
KayLillyt_1

This story pulls its readers in with the very first words. Taking us all through a beautiful world of redemption, love and so much more. So very worth reading.

2yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Lancee

This is a great story, the idea have been translated well into words and the whole creation of this fantasy world is amazing. Careful use of words and a beautiful picture created that makes it worth the read. A great read

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
World_Wanderer

Interesting novel! Personally, I liked it. The characters are good and the story is great! Besides I liked their interactions between each other, very interesting to read. Great work, author!

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Heart59

I am loving this book! Dear author, you’re book is so interesting! YOu deserve 5 stars for a wonderful book! Keep up the excellent work! I’m rooting for you!

2yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Supersam362

First off, really good story. The character's are introduced well and their interactions are fun and enjoyable to read. The world building is unique and really fleshes out the setting. I enjoyed the writing style, even if there were a few errors. This is an awesome story and I'm happy to give it it's 10th review. Great job author and keep up the good work.

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
star_dreamer

First, great summary. Really struck a chord in my heartstrings. The story is amazing! It's got a very detailed science fiction feel, makes it quite interesting to read cause the detailing is not too much, not too less- just right. The conversations are good and realistic and scenes change smoothly. Good job author!

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Lonewo1f

The author sure knows how to write. You got a great style of writing. I liked it. Genevieve's character is interesting. Although I did find few errors here and there, I'm assuming they'll be fixed after proofreading. So, 5 stars for you author because of this interesting plot. I would have given 4.8 because of those errors. But, they are minor ones that can be fixed right away. Lastly, as a suggestion, I'll say ~ Try to break down the long paragraphs. P.S ~ Keep up the good work!!

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Dee_author

Great post-apocalyptic storyline with an air of mystery and suspense. Good descriptive writing style. Worldbuilding is nicely done. You can see the effort the author put into creating the world and the characters. Great job author! Keep it up![img=recommend]

2yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
heyitsmejovi

Your story is great! The characters are awesome! The way you made the character interactions were good and it makes the story more interesting! Great work, author!

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Eshal_Shahnawaz

I think I really like the story plot a lot. The idea of redemption is unique and interesting. The charcters and story development are great too. Great job author!

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
shifu7

Thank you for posting this wonderful novel , I really love your work and makes inspire every day . Every plot and characters were very portrait beautifuly as I would like to see every updates everyday .

2yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
TofSpades

The plot, writing style, characters, and grammars were all absolutely good! I saw some very few grammatic flaws but despite those the story still is amazing. I think I'll keep on reading and find out what more will happen. Great job Author.

2yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
RandomPotato

Hi buddy! I just want you to know that your story is good! I like how you laid out all the conflicts in the novel. The main character is also very likeable and intelligent! I look forward on the development of the characters and the novel. Good job!!!

2yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
_Jaeee

The story has great potential for it lets the readers engage in the story as they read through. The correct use of words for a more better understanding of the story adds up to its uniqueness. Kudos!

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
waurpel

A tale full of mystery, the writting keeps a sense of suspense while still giving a lot of personality to the characters! I thoroughly enjoy it! Keep up the great work!

2yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Anotoki
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This book is definitely a cup of my tea. The characters are told and written is well done! The way you write is simply amazing! The characters emotions they showed, the little details they make, and the scene, you write it amazingly well!

2yr
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