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A boy named Emil suddenly finds himself in the body of Danzo, right in the midst of the First World War Shinobi, shortly before the death of Tobirama Senju.
What will he do and what will the Darkness of Konoha become under his leadership?
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26 Chaps down, and I can say this one is the kind of refreshment in Naruto ff. For me, I can read your writing no problem. How the interaction going on sometime confuse me with - or " , but I can make it work. There's an indication of romance, but I don't see any indication of Harem. Please don't make it on this kind of ff. Bunch of kids will do, atleast that's my opinion. Story development so far seems like a wish fulfillment, and I'm cool with that. Please continue with your own twist. I haven't got my conclusion on how the power level work on this one, so far it's your weak to strong with author's wish fulfillment. But I'll just give it a try. May author continue the update.[img=update]
The idea is not bad, but had to give up. The dialogues are way too confusing (different dialogue format instead in quotations), in need of editing and grammatical fixing.
It's really good Review: The story talks about someone who transmigrated in naruto world as danzo's and inherented his memories.. In my opinion the best thing about this novel is it's fighting scenes. Well I RECOMMEND IT FOR WHO WANTS TO TRY SOMETHING NEW (not completely new but yeah )
Bad grammar and bad execution on the author’s part here. The 5-star bots are everywhere so don’t listen to them…………..best I can give you is a 2-3
Good fanfic afafafaffafafafafafaffafafafafaffafafafafaffafafafafafaffafafafafafaffafafafafafaffafafafafaffafafafafaffafafafaffafafaffaghhshehshshhshshdhdhdhhdhdhdhdhhdhdhdhhd
Above all else, the biggest problem is writing quality. It's definitely among the worse ones in this platform. The author wants to write in English but uses the Brazilian format, this is simply annoying and makes the reading experience go down a notch. Overall, the writing needs to improve ASAP, as it's truly the biggest sin of this fanfic.
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Что ж, сама история вполне хорошая. Это ж, нихера себе, страну молнии отжали. Хотя, реакция Мито, какая-то ёбнутая, слишком идиалестический взгляд. Что касаемо гг, помимо Хигане будут ещё девушки? Если да, то сколько? Не будет, с Хигане трагедия? А то, бывало, берут ноумнеймовую девушку, делают любовь, все дела, а потом БАЦ, и нету. Убили её, а ГГ либо получает POWER или мотивацию, к воскрешению возлюбленной. Единственный минус, это то, что главы маленькие, сюжет медленно идёт. А так хорошее произведение.
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this fanfic is good. good job author-san! this fanfic is good. good job author-san! this fanfic is good. good job author-san! this fanfic is good. good job author-san!
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Other than your writing quality, everything else is 5 stars. Keep up the great job and hopefully, you will finish this fan-fic. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I like it very much, please release more chapter's. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🐷
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The guy entered Danzo's body and didn't have any golden fingers. Furthermore, he chose to follow the canonical plot, being the root and refusing the Hokage title. It doesn't seem to me something new or interesting.
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