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Rise Of The System Holder

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นักเขียน: Yoroshee

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In future earth, where humanity awakened to magic and superpowers because of a strange wish-granting artifact, the strong and wealthy enter a fierce competition to claim the artifact and rule the world.

Meanwhile, Adam King, a recent orphan living in New York City, is leading a life full of suffering and hardship. Bullied by his classmates and abandoned by his relatives, he lives life on the sideline.

But, one day,

[Congratulations! You awakened the Akashic system.]

A single notification turns Adam's world upside down. Using the power of the system, the young man ventures into the world to uncover its secrets and change his destiny.

[I do not own the cover of the story. If you know the artist, please contact me on discord Yoroshee#6091 to give them credit.]
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Bonus chapters:
100 powerstones= 1 chapter
300 powerstones= 2 chapters
500 powerstones= 3 chapters
I will upload the bonus chapter(s) on Sunday.

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    Yoroshee

    Hello readers! I was hoping to hear your thoughts and answer all questions that you may have about the novel so far. Things you should know first; 1) I encourage all opinions. I will do my best to acknowledge your opinions and answer your questions. 2) This novel is still in the initial chapters and I will reveal more details about the world as the story progresses. 3) Every volume will contain 20 chapters. 4) The current uploading schedule will change with the beginning of volume 2. 5) There is absolutely no Harem in this story. 6) The MC's character will continuously grow with the story, so don't expect a perfect MC from the beginning. Hope you're having a good day and thank you for continuing to support my novel! -Yoroshee

    2yr
    ดู 14 การตอบกลับ
    MonstersAreLife

    ABSOLUTELY magnificent, a new take on the monster and super power ridden novels, the new way the author uses the system is refreshing. Can’t wait for more !

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    2yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Omer_Yassin

    Amazing work from the author. They took something pretty basic and added some spices to it I can't wait to see how this will turn out.

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    2yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Nickaido

    Exciting Premise, although it is only two chapters right now, it's fascinating, especially after seeing his status. I'm looking forward to Adam's adventure. I wish there were more chapters; I'm hungry for more. I have collected it and can't wait.

    2yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    002_Yuki_Onna

    Long chapters is what everyone loves! obviously I'm included in that... As for the story..so far so good! I won't say much because only 2 chapters are released and we have alot to discover I think this will be a great story!! Keep up the good work author!! oh BTW I joined the contest too lol

    2yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Ajame_649

    well quite good plot line though quite cliche , I think making the story more immersive and detailing the character's and event would make the novel better

    2yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Ash0663

    Absolutely absorbed in every chapter I have read so far. Super interesting twist on the world/system setup. I'm interested to see how the mc will be developed. Can't wait to see where it goes, loving it so far. I definitely recommend![img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]

    2yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Seventynine79

    For anyone wondering, the one on cover is Fate from Berserk of Gluttony. .

    2yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Average_Daoist

    solid 3 but could be more if the mc personality change. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

    2yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    WarrantyW

    Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

    2yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Kontas
    LV 14 Badge

    Good book but bland MC, He's got a high strength but low intelligence, make it higher cause you cant fight only with strength, sometimes you need to use your brain to think fast.

    2yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    FavourEkele_1969

    I recommend this novel! It's very sweet and systematic as it should be. The perfect backstory aka motivation for a great character in the works, and I should say I really enjoyed reading, I liked the grammar, it really flows well! Keep going!

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    2yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Stormzz
    LV 13 Badge

    The writing is a strong point. Descriptions are well done, and the first chapter does a good job of setting the scene. Future chapters are needed to fully see how good the story and characters will develop, but a very good start.

    2yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Ultimatedaywriter

    The story so far is exactly what I was looking for a refreshingly down to earth Litrpg. The MC has to worry about very human concerns and a system that doesn't understand or care about the human experience. In my opinion its an excellent start.

    2yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Leighton_Ressler

    It's not every day you stumble upon an amazing novel. But today was. I was hooked within the first four chapters and cant wait for more chapters to come out.

    2yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Wail_Aziz

    I'm in love with the premise!! A boy with a system living in NYC is something I never heard of before. The author really surprised me with the amount of realistic aspects in this fantasy story. Please keep writing this one

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    2yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    DelzGB
    LV 13 Badge

    Despite being at only three chapters, it's clear to see that there is a lot to love here. There is instant intrigue set with the very first section of the very first chapter, so don't worry about waiting very long to get into the story. It quickly sets the world up that you'll be exploring from each chapter beyond in its own unique enviroment.

    2yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Sandipan_Dutta_7440

    It's a really good plot and this story will shine and keep doing the good work I am super excited for new chapters to keep going, my friend

    2yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Rayne_Rue

    Rating this with a 5.0 Overall because despite this chapter having only 2 chapters it really does attract readers and for that I'm happy to say I saved this book in my library and will read whenever I get time keep it up and update the next chapter keep it up !!!oh I almost forgot I love the characters too.

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    2yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Karibdis

    Although in the early chapters, it shows great promise. Can't wait to see what the author has planned for the future. Please keep writing and good luck.

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    2yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ

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