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Adrian, a desperate man on the edge of suicide, is unexpectedly transferred to another world. Stranded in this harsh world, he must confront the harsh truths of his new surroundings and find a way back home. Adrian has to have the resolve to keep going on, even as he wonders if he'll ever return to the life he left behind.
Will he give in to despair, or will he find the strength to overcome the trials that lay ahead and become the universe's most powerful entity?
This compelling story of survival and self-discovery will keep you riveted. Join Adrian on his journey to return home and become the most powerful being in the cosmos!
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NONE of the reference art in this novel is mine; it was found online (no reference to artists found unless otherwise). The art serves only to give the reader an idea of what the art corresponds to in the novel.
The artwork that I used in the cover is not mine. All credits to the owner.
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This story reads like an anime, and I could almost picture it as one, which is really fun. Adrian is a good character so far, and as a programmer myself, I'm liking some of the decisions made (I won't say what to avoid needing to use the spoiler tag).
The number of chapters is low for now but even then I can say that the novel has a lot of potential. The story flows smoothly and there is no major error in grammar and vocabulary. Adding this to my library since I am looking forward to future developments. Keep it up author!
I am the type of reader that only reads the first chapter or so then calls quits so my reviews may be a bit lazy but you got me to reach the second chapter just by mc's comedy so I approve. I know writing and stuff takes extensive planning and it can be a tiring chore really. For me I like stuff straight to the point so if I were to write a novel it would have story and world building but maybe missing bits of process of explanation in logic. All I see in first chapters is that authors do like 33 paragraphs but a lot of them are just written in 2 lines with good spacing. I am digressing... Anyway you could make it big as an author you are able to overcome your hurdle of consistency!
It's a nice story with good background . You may tend to keep reading when you start because of the thril to know another world .In short it's a nice pick to read.
Overall it's pretty good! It can drag in some parts and feels like info is being dumped on us at the beginning, but it's got a lot of potential. Also, be careful that you don't switch tenses mid-sentence (past to present). You don't do it often, but it sticks out when you do.
Since this is my first review, I'll be frank. First, your quality of writing needs to be improved, because in the dialogues you messed up a few of them. Second, worldbuilding. You need to specify where the empires or countries where they are located. Overall, your story has potential, so keep writing, and I'm also looking for more!
In short, it was a fair read. Might need to improve on the dialogues as they sounded a bit inorganic. Additionally, some sentences can be rearranged to make them flow more smoothly. Overall, the story has potential, just needs some minor adjustments. So, thank you for your hard work, author.
Wasn't surprised as this turned out to be one of the great books on this platform. Even so, this book remained vast and unique. The language is clear and relatable. This book will get the applause it deserves I am sure. Compared to other rebirth novels I've read this one stands out completely. Extremely high potential, I can see this on the top rankings in web novels in the near future. I hope to see you there too author!
🤩 Author, I love this book. Looking forward to when the Demon emperor appears and bring terror to the world. Hmmm, I love it that whenever the demon appears, everyone would tremble in fear upon hearing his name.
Yeah this story is the best. Though there were some grammatical errors, it has been epic and I can't wait to read more. Author, pls continue
Very interesting story so far. Interesting world background and interesting characters and plotline. You won't be disappointed by reading this novel.
the concept is good and novel is amazing. yes there are a few grammatical errors but apart from that its amazing keep up the good work all the best for your future
So, I'll make a personal review in this one. All I gotta say is this is my first novel that I wrote, so its gonna be terrible at first. This novel is the story of a certain individual who was summoned out of nowhere, and then gets stronger and more wicked as the story progresses on.