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Humans encountered numerous monsters in a world where they spontaneously acquire superhuman abilities and seek to destroy it.
To protect this world, I take on the role of a lord in order to put an end to the conflict between humans and monsters and to those responsible. I must become stronger and develop into the one and only being capable of ending and beginning everything if I am to defeat them.
One opposes all
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- คุณภาพของการแปล
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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Took an overview seems nice....Nice Concept can't say much as far as I have read it was a good read..........Best of luck for your next enaveduars
I have no problem with the storyline but the only thing I wanted to point out is that try not to capitalize every single of your letters. You can use it only, for example, the characters names, places and when they're summoning the powers(?)
Here is my review to your story (though, you did not personally ask me to give this one.) Assuming that English language is not your first one, grammar and technicality wise, please, AGAIN, refrain from CAPITALIZING each word on your paragraphs. I found this a bit dull, disturbing and annoying while reading the first chapter. Thank you.
Ray is a interesting character. I felt sorry for him because he thought of himself as weak. This is a neat story. I'd like to see more. Keep up the good work.
I like mysterious story. Your book is about mysterious. I wish you will do yior best. Best of luck.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The start was awesome! I love monsters stories and this one got that ingredient that wants me to stay up reading. The story and character development were brilliant. keep writing!!
Why do you capitalize the first letter of every word? That was a big turn-off for me. And the scene changes provided in asterisks were also the same. Other than that, this story is great! Has good potential