Summoned in a Noble's Body [ Moved to a New Link!!]

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Devesh_Kulkarni

Hello everyone, I honestly don't know how this novel will turn out, I don't have much experience. I'm just writing what I would like in a novel, but I hope that it turns out good. I'm going to focus more on politics and kingdom-building rather than action and fight scenes... there are a lot of action novels where the MC is fighting every two chapters. I do not want that. I hope everyone will enjoy it, feel free to criticize as much as possible so I can improve. Thanks to all the future readers.

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levigo

I really like how the story is told. It feels like a very professional writing and I think he has a good skill also in weiting and also in how he gives place to every character through out the story

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T_O_K_Y_O

First time reading a novel that has 50k below views but honestly in my opinion it was a surprisingly great novel after reading 20 chapters on this novel and it deserves more views I hope it goes well in the future chapters! Good job author!

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WandererMonk

I always love it when I come across a story from my Indian brothers. I quite liked the story premises so far. However, the grammar needs some work. Keep up the excellent work.

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Devesh_Kulkarni

The novel has been moved to a new link by the same title. Thank You!

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ArgaNov01

I can't really complain to the author. this is good.

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Clement_Osei_6060

LOVE THIS NOVEL and can't wait for how the story will unfold[img=update]

As a reader, writing quality is a matter for me. In your first chapters, there are some errors that I found and I immediately question myself if I'll continue to read it or not. The first thing is to always start your sentence with a capital letter. Some of your sentences are fragments with grammatical errors. I don't know. I was captured by the cover and I thought I should give it a try but the first chapter is disappointing. I suggest you, please edit it rather than add more chapters of it. And please improve your thought about the story because I can see that some of what you write scattered i to different directions. I hope you'll accept a criticism from a reader. Sorry I don't sugar coat review. If you want to impress readers, impress us with good writings .

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PilgrimJagger

Great Job Devesh, keep updating and creating amazing stuff[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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BorbMeatball

Fun story! I am interested in finding out how the two souls thing works out! The take on magic is a bit more unique than other novels as well, which I like. The story is well paced and isn't rushed. I like how the MC advances at a fairly realistic pace given his gifts. However, I would like to see more of how the other characters experience the changes in the MC/Rudra through their reactions, rather than stating how they feel about it. The characters would also benefit from each having a more distinct 'voice' of their own; as right now, they all sound fairly similar in speech. Additionally, a bit more context and comparison for how strong the various warriors and mages are at each rank would help give more meaning to the ranking system. Though, I do like the numerical style as it makes comparison easy. Finally, the style and grammar could be improved. For instance, more imaginative language would help immerse the reader in the story (like in the first chapter, describe Yama and what makes him so scary instead of simply saying he terrified others). Keep it up, author!

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asdsdaasd

Although it could have been a little better, the first chapter was quite good. I did like the extra details in some places but not in others. Was the original 15-year-old boy's soul lost or killed, to be honest? And did the new soul take possession of the body?

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Mari_Angel_Pain_Wr

I think you have a good talent. Don't lose it, do it again and again! With every year it will be better! Your story is very good and I think I will read every your story!

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Willhem_Duy

The incarnation/possession isn't rare now and certainly, the main character being at the lowest point in the previous world is overused at this point. However, if you want a balance main in this genre, this story is for you. While not being praised for originality, the world-building is well-written and balanced. There are still a few grammar errors here and there and some awkward paragraph breaks. The main character Karna while not being too overpowering or having the benefit of a possession main is hard-working and worth watching. The side characters, however, stagnated. Overall, a well thought story 7/10

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emaan_Hussain_2035

The story seems interesting and I enjoy reading it too. it is well-written and well-exemplified. I wish you the best of luck for your novel writer

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Glend_David

btw who is the MC, and this is harem, so who have the harem? i hope it's the real MC and not the other one, and I am not even read it yet so I don't know, but are they feel like sleep when swap or can see everything the other see, and can they feel the same, like if he get injured 2 of them feel it

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Nico_Leztier

one of the best transmigration storys ive read, i highly recommend that you read this and support it to the fullest!