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What if an average and ordinary guy was reborn in the world of Dragon Ball as Frieza?

*THIS IS A MTL*

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  1. MrSheta
    MrSheta ให้ความสนใจ 10
  2. _The_Shady_
    _The_Shady_ ให้ความสนใจ 5
  3. InternetSaint
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InternetSaint

This story is an insult to the character of Frieza. Basically the MC becomes Frieza and instantly starts to "fix" the main storyline as in he "pretends" to be evil so Gokua can become super Sayjan after which the story becomes even more cringe as the MC openly starts protecting Goku, stepping between him and Cooler and transforming into a 5th form like Cooler can. The story and the MC himself are just cringe.

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Chaddts

aside from some obvious grammer mistakes and mispelt words it is readable ,but I warn against that. 24 years. Yes 24 years from.the time the book starts to chapter 3 pass and the book goes from this is who I am and how I died to "me strong frieza" and it is all TOLD to the readers not shown. Frankly this isn't even fun to read at all. I can't recommend this on good faith.

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VeiledinBlack

was actually excited when I saw it was a translation work cause they usually have a good story, but not this one I mean 24years and the MC still treats this like some kind of game.

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_The_Shady_

it's MTL translation but can be improved. request for the author to please keep on updating don't lose your moral and motivation to translate due to some bad reviews, other people tends to just bash other fanfic translation if they find it not upto their taste.

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MrSheta
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I find a lot of subjectivity in the ratings given, so I'll be as objective as possible. The idea is interesting; the writing can be improved a lot since it has some errors (not to say many); That the mc is Japanese seems a bit out of context, but it doesn't interfere much with the future development of the story; the mc's personality is passive and if although he suddenly seems to be shouting orders, in reality he is very passive being that he can perfectly silence the ideas of his subordinates by sending a ki attack to those guys, after all, they are quite weak; the progression of his powers is slow, too slow if we think that he spent 15 years trying to adapt to his body and training, we have to think that freezer trained almost 1 year to reach gold freezer, I don't think it took 15 years to adjust his strength, it is illogical considering the monstrous capabilities of Frieza's body; the way it handles time and the timeline in the chapters is not the best, an example of this is spending 15 years in a single chapter... So far those were the things I found, I hope the author's writing will increase its quality.

1yr
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Topo_15

I really hate when authors bring in oc’s into stories for no reason which in this case is crystal and then he also confessed to not being the original Frieza which this random character named Crystal somehow found out about. Then there’s also the fact that he acts like a coward sometimes which i find pretty annoying and his personality just seems really annoying to be honest.

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