Fairy Tail: Master Dragneel

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aswsok

Indeed, it sounds like a good idea. Of course adding a new variable to mean different flames will make the story either great or bad. This is how the author orders. But the development of the world is too long. I'm not ashamed to say that everyone is interested in the reaction of the guild members to the adult Natsu. But I don't see any character and world development. I also don't quite understand why the author adds references to the MCU, Wanda and Pietro. It's cool, of course, but why?

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Dragonised101

from the sound of the description sounds like or is "fairy tail fourth master" which sadly stoped updating ages ago but was really good, so if its's anything like that here's my five ⭐

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read3r_9030

really great story so far, good grammar and interactions with other characters, haven't seen much of fanfictions where natsu gets left behind for the s class trials. can't wait for more chapters.

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MrIIIo

the story idea is very interesting and there are no issues with the grammar, but there are 2 things that bother me. First is the addition of essence flames, there are a lot of ways to power in fairy tail and Natsu has even more since he is a dragon slayer and END. There was no reason to add these essence flames that are similar to those in cultivation novels. The major point i dont like about this is how Natsu's personality seems to be very different. It's like somrone else merged with him and only a few habits and character traits of natsu were left over.

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Blazeshield21

I was really surprised when I started to read this story because it reminded me a lot of another story that I read that was similar to this one. I was also surprised that you added essence flames to this which is kind of cool, I cant wait for more to come.

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InnerVoice

I like the story so far (chapter 3) but yknow without natsu there , many members of not all of them will die from the evil guild and if by chance some did survive, there won’t be enough members to activate the fairy barrier and they’ll all die from acnologia breathe attack

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HappyKing

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Daoist422011

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YouLikeBOOBS

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IndraD22

Thank you for the Fic, It's difficult to find a Natsu Guild Master, and you are killing It right now. I hope you continue, and thank you once again for your hard work

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towerofdevil53

hasta ahora me gusta la historia no hay muchas historia de fairy tail que si sean buenas y de calidad como esta [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]

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Jhonathan_Carrasco

I really love this story so please keep it up.!

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sykotardis

I love this story .........................

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Chance_No

Please continue this! All the other Fairy Tail FF I've read I disliked or had been dropped.

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Asura_Of_Gluttony

Good stuff.

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Shishume

Just reading the description/Synopsis makes my blood boil, is this inspired by fairy tail "The fourth master" i think thats's the title of that fanfic..

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Reincarnation_God

I really like the book. It was made after another fanfic called fairy tails fourth master. But its not a copy. there are many major difference between the books. The grammar is also really good. And the author seems focused on Natsu's character development right now. And not really rushing towards the tenrou group returing soon and relationships. overall I would recommend reading this and I look forwar to seeing how well this story progresses.