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A/N- This story focuses heavily on the Magecraft and Magic aspect of Nasuverse. This is not just summoning and being a weak human master. MC's goal is to study Magecraft and Magic to its full potential and become a stronger being and get the f*ck out of Nasuverse
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Reincarnating is not something Cael expected, that too not in fate franchise. Then again, his life has been unpredictable even to him.
Screw the heroic spirits and God-damn holy Grail that won't grant wishes anyway. For him, it's just a part of the wide world.
He decided he will research magecraft and do everything for his goal.
The only thing within in expectations, To
Reach the Root and attain Magic.
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This is a quick paced story and not that great in my opinion. I just wanted to explore magecraft in fate.
This story is originally in my wattpad account. If you already read it there, thank you, I hope you enjoyed the story.
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5/5 would read again. Jokes aside, who wouldn't enjoy a good story, one that is even finished?
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i saved 2 fate fanfics glad that i read this last this fanfic is better than most fate fanfic here i am satisfied with the ending but i feel like he could have explored more
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A neat little book only 60 chapters long and has a quick ending. I enjoyed reading this and will leave my mark here.
I liked it but ending was just way too fast for my taste. Start while a little fast it was not as fast as the ending. I expected to see more but final "arc" or whatever you say only took 2 and a quarter chapter(i really wanted to see king hassan ngl i never see it in fanfics expect for cannon folder). It's great that its not Harem, it would be stupid since i sincerely think Harem is the logically thinking stupitiest thing to do for a guy that searches power and doesn't think much about humatiy nor emotions. Him leaving it instantly after he got the power to do was also dissapointment in my part. I expected to at least see his "apprentices" or look at some other worlds not just return. Why would he return btw he didn't think much about his original world so why i don't undertand it
This is exactly what i wanted in a fate story. I couldn't find a lot of fanfics that match this description. Thanks for making this.
I enjoyed the story quite a lot. it was a fun but short read great for passing the time. a few things that the story would benefit from is description. they are practically non-existent, through the book the background, characters, everything lacked descriptions that aided in imagining what I'm reading.another thing that would be better for the story is to elongate the situations. they kind of passed from one thing to the next, there was no mundane happenings or side trips it was feeling more like a railroad rather than taking place in a world. the author did a great job on his limited use of other people pov. just the right amount to spice up the story but not so much that it takes away from the main story. expanding on the characters around the main character would make them feel less 2d they felt used and then discarded. I enjoyed the theatrics of his disguise in the war, an extention of this would have made the situation more interesting. the story would benefit with a more detailed explanation of how he got the magic with his expirementaion he researched rather than just adding powers to the list of what he can do, I want to see the main character work for his Power rather than hearing he got. the character described it was all for benefits many of time through the stories perhaps describing his actions in such a way the side characters could pick up on it would have been better. the concept of "show don't tell" would have made this piece much better. currently this is all I can think of. a side note is I would have lived to see and read descriptions of the ending past arc. the concept was really cool but it felt too fast and lacking what the Nobel phantasm looked like.despite me mentioning all these weak points dont think that this piece is bad, it was a great read and it held my interest through the whole story. author just needs to focus on these points in the future to expand his writing ability. (tried to keep this spoiler free so I broadly mentioned specific things)
Really good!!! This is the first nasuverse fanfic that I have finished Hopefully we get a sequel for this........ .....,....................... ..................... ........................................................ ........................................................
I liked the story a lot and it was my first time reading something like that👍🏻👍🏻
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Thank you for completing this creation, this was an enjoyable read, and i wish you a great day.
This story is very wel done. Even tho the story is a bit on the short sides I enjoyed every part of it. Good job!!!
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i’ve only read the synopsis and i like the premise, however can you please not add a harem. it’s just a preference thing i’ll probably reed it ether way.