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Neurolink System in the Modern World

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นักเขียน: InnocentFox

4.33 (36 เรตติ้ง)

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[System Activate : Neuro link]
[Warning : Extreme Explicit Mission]
[Accept Mission (Yes) (No) ]

[Mission Reward : Mind Break Unlock ]
[Mission Penalty : Erectile dysfunction]

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    InnocentFox

    Thank you for reading my book. I won't talk too much about it , so I'll let you decide if it's good or not. Feel free to ask me anything here, and I'll do my best to respond. I'm not a very serious person btw, so I tend to inject humor into my responses.

    9mth
    ดู 47 การตอบกลับ
    Maksim_Yushko

    "Mission Reward : Mind Break Unlock ] [Mission Penalty : Erectile dysfunction]" I hate this type of system, let's drop this too high rate. Say no to forced, abusive systems!

    7mth
    ดู 6 การตอบกลับ
    Daoist_Culture

    What can I say after 10 chaps? Looks like a promising novel, with system in modern settings. Mc is not a wuss, and have interesting ideas. I hope for some more "action" soon, right now easy 5 stars. I really enjoy it.

    9mth
    ดู 10 การตอบกลับ
    Arcady
    LV 14 Badge

    I enjoyed reading this, it would be really nice if you keep building on the characters so they won't be irrelevant later on. Looking forward to more chapters.

    9mth
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    MZAF
    LV 12

    This novel is the kind that grows on you as you read further. The author's skill in creating plot twists and mind games is really impressive, even though I sometimes catch myself questioning the action of the MC. Then suddenly, just like the "I have you in the first half" meme, the author surprises me with a twist that completely changes my perspective. Making me laugh because I can't believe that I did not see it coming .

    9mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Sabaroth_zarkiel

    Hello author I wanted to know if there ntr or Yuri in this novel .

    10mth
    ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
    SweetRayne

    Although I liked the premise of the story, the way the author names their characters made me drop almost instantly. The author is using korean names completely wrong and it makes me cringe. For example, Ji-Hoon Alyssa is the first female character introduced where Ji-hoon is supposed to be the last name and Alyssa is her first name. Ji-hoon is a first name for a boy in korea. Last names are usually one syllable i.e. Kim, Lee, Park, etc. while first names are two syllables like Ji-hoon. I tried powering though and ignoring it but this tiny detail makes this novel completely unreadable for me. Writing- About what you expect for a webnovel time waster MC- Supposed to be some amalgamation of villainous actions with hypocritical righteous inner monologue to depict some realism but comes off disjointed. Also he dumb. Story- Bleh Premise- Promising for a fun villain type lemon story but doesn't deliver

    6mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    DaoistEchPYX

    garbage cliche worthless novel. good to pass the time. worthless otherwise. loser mc. cliche tropes everywhere every second, mc is "smart" for plot conveniences. dont waste ur time.

    6mth
    ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
    GearGod

    Just finished chapter one... man the mc went through a lot 😭great introduction, dialogue and narrative

    10mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Mytzi
    LV 3 Badge

    Well written, pretty interesting plot, but I think the system needs something that sets it apart from other novels. Other than that very good descriptions.

    10mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Dexter_Sled_1111

    OMG. The story is very good. there are a lot of things that I need to look forward to which is exciting.

    เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
    10mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    MysticxMist

    novel is a good read. It's refreshing to read an MC who's not brain dead and actually uses his mind.

    6mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Hanimated

    Its just so good. I'm so used to dealing with boring mc's that do braindead stuff for no reason that this novel genuinely shocked me. It has an mc who actually thinks and does stuff that he wants with his powers. A really refreshing break from the commonplace garbage being developed rn, thank you author for this amazing read.

    8mth
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Sleeping_Scholar

    Reviewing this book again after reading 50 chapters. The author remained consistent in providing quality content and I'm glad that this novel gets 3 chapters per day upload because this story is just too addictive.It just shows how dedicated the author is in providing content. Kudos to the author.

    9mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    NeilllJohnnn

    it's good, i like it ,.,.,.,,..,,.,..,. a

    10mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Nikage

    Ngl character description is on point, storyline it's okay and the plot. I see good development, definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

    10mth
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Erffee_Ffcds

    Absolute trash. The author tries so hard to seem smart but its clear he’s a failed person. To give you an idea of how bad it is, the author starts the story by descr someone as “half Korean half American”

    1mth
    ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
    Viadhivan_Ranata

    The New Cover is good, and that jail bar which give an immersion of imprisonment very much, I like it. It make one wonder wether it's the MC who put his brainwashed girls in a cage, or it's the girls who turns yandere and caged the MC as their property instead 😅😆🤣

    2mth
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Badgersssss

    I love the story ,the characters ,everything but please author what is Your discord account for art illustration

    2mth
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Viadhivan_Ranata

    Author-san, can I use your awesome novel cover picture for my profile pictures???? Here is All Five Stars on All Five Categories for Yours Truly 😆🤩🌠🌟🌠⭐🌠🌟✨🤩😆

    4mth
    ดู 2 การตอบกลับ

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