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Ronan Johanson, a normal orphan living in Little Whinging when he realized that he had transmigrated, was pleased. With the knowledge of a 35-year-old stock broker, who hand transmigrated into 1991, he realized that he would be able to become a billionaire if he played his cards right.
Transmigrated with the gift of photographic memory and minor telekinesis he thought that his life would be awesome. But when a squat little old woman, calling herself Professor Sporut comes knocking at his door, he realizes that his life is not going to be as easy as he thought it to be.
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Please note the following things:-
>MC would be a villain. But, keep in mind that this is not the kind of novel where the MC acts like a psychopath from day one. He will walk on the path slowly.
>MC won't remember the full extent of the story of movies.
>For the first few chapters, the story would follow canon, but variation would start taking place soon when MC would enter the second year.
>This is not a harem fic. I have not thought about the love interest, if anyone has any suggestions then feel free to comment.
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MC is basically irrelevant in the story as it mostly follows canon. Lots of grammar inconsistencies as well as missing words in sentences. Wouldn't bother reading further.
Author misuse modal verbs oftentimes. Story development is rehash, we got an AU but somehow everything is still about Harry Potter. Character Design is smart, but it's stupid how he only got the 2nd spot for transfiguration. Updates are above average.
I don’t think a 35 year old transmigrated soul should fall in love. I think they should be goal oriented selfish something like immortality afterall as human grow older they wanna live forever
I really like it so far (as of 32 chapters). Author, ignore the commenters who are dumb and can’t read properly. You are doing great.
Try to increase updating stability if possible. Rest is average in my opinion but as you get more experience, it will only improve.
INFELIZMENTE, é mais uma fic com enredo sem contexto que não segue o desenvolvimento do personagem criado para ela. É mais um coadjuvante com pinta de fodão mas que não tem desenvolvimento e que fica nos calcanhares do cânone. A escrita e gramática é boa. Leia por conta e risco.
didn't even read a single chapter but a 5 star review cuz it doesn't cost me anything but . . . author should add harry potter tag it will definitely increase reach. . . . and please let fleur be fl. pls pls pls
bro if your going to write a bad guy wizard mc story here is a tip do a real bad boi wizard fanfic a real cheater at magic a mc that studies to be the most powerful of his generation really twist it give him tattoos muscles through underground arena fighting a real charmer/player the girls love to hate and hate to love even if you tie the mc to one of the 28th families have your mc not care or give a fuke about them since they either knew of him growing up on the streets or didn't care to rescue him a real dark horse harry potter fanfic not a cookie cutter plot fallower do this and your patron subscribers will pop up alot take 15 chapters for summer time to write the mc in a boxing or mixed fighter gaining ranking making a name for himself or make him a thief giving the aurors and ministry a headache trying to catch him spend your time crafting a fanfic like this you will definitely get alot more readers
good book. it's good progression, with some unique ideas (e.g, fight club) the first few chapters are rough around the edges (eg, him not having personal memories but then remembers something his sister said), but that's mainly just at the start. don't expect an mc who knows the entirety of the plot. He only really knows snippets, but I think it's a unique take on it and works well.
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This is a fantastic story. Premise ind Canon changes are very interesting. The main character is interesting. The pace is pretty good. Here is Five stars to keep your going.
Muito divertido. Claro acho estranho ele ter uma memória tão boa e simplesmente mistura grande parte da história. Porém ainda sim muito divertido.
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TLDR: Bad Story Development, Bad MC, Inconsistent World Building. (1) The MC is Basically a plus 1 to the Golden Trio or Rather The Golden Four in this story. He antagonizes a very influential group of people when he is basically nothing at the moment. (2) The Story is in AU where Nevile is The Boy Who Lived but the story still acts like Harry is the Boy Who Lives. (3) The story development is going worse at the moment, the MC is not the main focus, The story itself is basically Cannon with the MC as bonus characters.