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Machinination King in Cultivation World
4.76 (14 เรตติ้ง)
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Wang Haoyu, once a respected leader of the Chinese underworld, loses his life in a tragic car accident. To his great surprise, he is reincarnated into a stereotypical Chinese cultivation world. However, his soul is transferred into the body of a person destined to become a protagonist also known as the Child of Heaven or the Child of Fortune. Taking possession of this body inadvertently causes the death of his host, thus accumulating negative karma. Determined to survive in this new world, Wang Haoyu relies on the skills he acquired in his previous life, and he receives assistance from the mysterious Machination God System.
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A good story and interesting plot looking forward for further developments in the story. 👍 keep up the work author.
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The writing is decent at the very least. The approach was a typical isekai xanxia where the mc is expected to have a good boost at the start before going into adventure. The interesting part is how can this novel be different from other xanxia novels. I can't really write a much detailed review because of little chapters but, overall, this novel has potential.
Wonderful. Even more great cultivation works to be enjoyed. The protagonist's personality is an instant sell. The concept of accumulating negative karma for taking over another's great destiny is well great. I look forward to seeing even more from the Machination God System.
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Generally I don’t like doing reviews before 40 chapters and at this time there are only 7. So far the story is very well written. I don’t see any issues with grammar and the premise is very interesting. Only thing I would point out is the story is already set out to be very fast paced. With glossing over a lot of what happens with short descriptions. He spent 5 days doing this then we get detailed info on something then he travelled and 3 things happened to him but it is summarized in a couple sentences. If you are planning for fast paced 2-300 chapter book this type of stuff is ok but if you plan on 500-1000 ch these details help slow the pace and give a better picture of the world. Overall I have enjoyed the content and hope author keeps it up. I think they have talent in writing
so here are my thoughts the writing is good, the pace of the story is slow a bit but still it's interesting and ya it sure needs more chps to develop so i'm waiting for more
Interesting work, good level of writing, an argument that is presented from the first chapter but without downloading a synopsis in which everything is said, good work in general, just a piece of advice given that the same thing happened to me in my novel, be careful with the updates of the character's stats, at first they will only be a few lines and they do not get in the way, but as the character grows they can take up most of the chapter. I have chosen to reduce them to a minimum for the sake of the plot, and make special chapters only with the updates. Keep writing
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