Pirates: Check In From Mariejo

LV 14

AaatEae

just another gotta catch em all, with Boa Hancock as the starter this time.

LV 5

Classified

Look the story itself is good, but the translation is barely readable. Wrong names, weird sayings the whole shubang. The author should consider editing it with chatgpt or something just to make it more readable.

LV 4

Joe_Anson

i didn't like it because it was not logical and creepyfalling for a child with an adult mentality is creepy man and in the beginning he entered the holy land because he cursed a dragon but with their behaviour they would have just killed him right then and there

LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

Writing quality: mtl 😬 This is chinese novel. The fanfic is bored and dropped. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] Below I will post images of Boa Hancock's life as a slave:

LV 4

Lizrock

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LV 13

CthulhuRlyeh

This is wish fulfillment , wish fulfillment. The protagonist so much as breathes people take it as the second coming of Jesus Christ.

LV 15

alfr0118

It was good up until chapter 170 or so and after that it gets bad in the writing part it is so confusing to read one part and then something that should not be a part of that chapter and then it goes back to the right way agian and it goes on like that a few times in eche chapter

LV 3

Sodium_Ruto

I dont normally criticize any story here because i just give up reading if the story is bad. But this one is pretty good until around chap 160, after that it becomes like a jigsaw puzzle where the translated paragraphs are in different orders in a chapter so it became a chore to read. Skipped upto 190 chapters just to see if it got fixed but nope so i drop it here

LV 14

Imt_Shaz

beware of very poor translation quality. read at your own risk.

LV 4

metraprix_12

The story itself it's good but the error in translation was a headache. The biggest problem is that around chapter 170 the translation was very bad and the paragraphs were in wrong order or from other chapters so it makes no sense, also from that point is just a retelling of canon so I dropped

LV 13

Sean_Herbig

ended to quick but at least finished could have round out the book properly for the ending but other then the last serial postings story development and quality were great.

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LV 11

Sumit_Bhamer

Except for a few mistakes the story is pretty good. keep going on . I expect more chapters daily and i will support you through power stones.

LV 13

MirageKing

This story is dumb tbh. U will lose braincells if u read it. Most situations and relationships r forced and not good.

LV 2

Gratiz_

You could say it's above average fanfic, but the translation is very bad, with each chapter it gets worse. Non the less I enjoyed it, so I'm going to rate it 3/5. With this translation it should be lower though.