Pokemon: Reborn as ash , Make up for your regrets and become stronger

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multiverses_sage

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Zaelum

Is a pretty good fanfic but still lacks quality on the translation, still that can be fixed, so translator do your best. Also to help you a little, use software to help you translate better, grammarly, chatgpt, etc. All of those are free and make your translation slightly more easy. Still, good job!

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daniel_vera

Excellent original story, if it can no longer be considered a translation, try reading the Chinese MTL and it is garbage. Keep it up. More

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rbp

read up to 30 chaps. and still writing has no improvement yet my brain had enough🤯💀💀💀,,like what is this - ("but now ash can earn his own money and travel without having to work so hard for his mother delia" totally different from what you wish to express) and a lot more of mistakes like this or even worse in every chapter, i repeat every chapter that reader's has to wrack their brains to make sense of what you want to express. so rather than releasing multiples off chap. in a short span of time, you could just take your time to write a better quality (just my suggestion though as it's up to you) WRITING QUALITY- 1⭐ UPDATING STABILITY- 5⭐ STORY DEVELOPMENT-4⭐ CHARACTER DESIGN- 4⭐ WORLD BACKGROUND- 5⭐ 4⭐ for the story development as i didn't reach the depth to judge your story.

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super_pichu

as its a fanfic thats just released , it pretty good , dont know how update stability will be . still looking forwward for more.

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GoldenZega606

It is a pretty good Pokémon fanfic and the story evolves every moment, especially the love for how it develops, exists and succeeds, good history

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Marcus_Hembree

I enjoy the pacing and fluid interactions with the characters. I do like that the author does pay attention to what the reader opinion, but still has his own clear vision. I will offer ideas in some of my comments, feel free to use them if I can inspire your creative flow for putting out more chapters. I hope to see where you decide to take your story and bring it to life. I appreciate the time and effort you spent on it. P.S. I'll be using this gif for any future ideas I'll will offer.

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dramatic_reader69

this novel started as a translation but the author made great changes to the story and made it so better than the original novel. keep it up and give more updates.

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Dark_PersonJJ

Interesting story, i always hated the fact,how Ash/Satoshi, just left behind some of his Pokemons and never come back for them.Sure in Pokemon Journey we have some comebacks from his older Pokemons, but no everyone,another thing is him just restarting everything, each time he travels to another region, and taking only Pikachu with him,and never again calling back his other Pokemon who are left on Profesor Oak ranch.

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NunuXD

Very good translation and novel, hope that you keep updating it ...........................................................................

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Asdrendor

Mr. author, you forgot about Sonia in galar, it is great material for waifu.................................... ................................................ . .................................................. .................................................. ... .................................................. .................................................. ...........................

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Amannensen

please don't drop it in the middle my friend

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Felipe_Girelli

A melhor fan fic de Pokémon---------‐-‐‐,,,,, ,,, ---------------------‐-----‐------------‐-‐‐,,,,, ,,, ---------------------‐-----‐-----

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Erie_Abreu_6358

Loving this hope you don’t stop 111111111

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towerofdevil53

i like the story ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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KnightOfDeath

Honestly it's one of the best Pokemon FF's I've seen on WebNovel👌

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Niaa_

looking forward since there not a lot of pokemon fics nowadays! [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Lyson

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69PAIN69

This an updated rating I've catch to the newest chapters and I can say this is a good pokemon fanfic at first I was worry the story was gonna be about ash harem taking most of the story but it's not but it's mostly misty and Sabrina and the author still wants to add 50s members to the harem and the 18s scenes can be skip and author let's u know when it's gonna start and end ill update this rating when I change my mind so far so good I have no almost no complains but to not add all those love interests (50 harem girls)