Being Reincarnated as Izuku Midoriya with a System!?!?!?

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Sora_26

I love your book hope you keep updating have a good day your fan from South Africa

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TheShadowMan

Grammar is terrible. Runon sentences everywhere. Massive paragraphs. Story has been alright just kinda dull. Gamer has dungeons and I don’t really care for that.

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Thissmithy_Manga

it's alright but nothing worthy of note, it feels like there is no plan for the story and the grammar is quite poor . it seems like the story is cobbled together at best, adding new dynamics on a whim. i hope you keep writing and continue to improve, thanks.

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Aayush_storms

Synopsis made my expectations low then as I read the story it kept getting higher through the theme may seem generic but it has easily climbed to my list of fix I check updates daily. (HIGHLY RECOMMENDED)

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DaoistOWRok5

Great story Horrible grammer Even worse than Chinese novels but the plot itself is very good

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MukomaTJ

Severe lack of punctuation makes this irritating to read/listen to at times. The status screens are also a peeve of mine, sometimes feeling like they're half the content. It's not for me, but I can get how that's the whole point for others. Otherwise it's an interesting idea for an au fic. The concept has legs and I can only hope it gets a rework in future. It would elevate the work so much.

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Readtilltheybleed

Recommended if you’re into masochism… otherwise avoid this piece of 💩. Story incorporates a bunch of different mechanisms from much better stories and throws them into a blender along with the MC.

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Sky_TheEnder132

grammar is as described as the synopsis, a big paragraph, but I've read worse than this so... slightly below average. the plot is... chaotic (looking at the latest chapter 988378 don't know). update stability is alright (I've seen worse too). world background- I mean, I love MHA. Author, keep improving. you barely passed I guess. (I'm not reading it tho)

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AGod

not too sure how long the author will continue the book but it's a nice change of pace compared to all the other mha fanfics it's refreshing.

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Vitor_Radanh

Just nothing he starts streaming to the multiverse, I didn't like it but there are those who like it

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antonio_montenegro

Malo, la descripción de la historia hace bien ( solo pude hasta el capítulo 4 ) ..................................................................................................................

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2018Lucki

bro the grammar is shiddy asl bro 😭😭 great story tho

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Iteq24_24

love the book author keep it up ..........

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KnightInArmor

So, as mentioned the grammar is bad but it is readable. but the problem starts with the whole 'live stream' he has a system and one of the system functions allows him to live stream what he is doing across the multiverse in return for money which I think is a horrible idea simply because he wants to become a hero, but he is showcasing his powers to the whole world even though he knows what will happen in the future

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Law_of_Self_doubt

Come on you can do it I see improvement in the writing and I super love the idea of the story and the personality of the MC is very good and I can't wait to see him take his revenge and have adventures in other worlds soon so please continue