HP: The Plague Doctor [LONG HIATUS]

LV 15

JohnWicksPencil

The story background is very detailed and interesting. To come up with such a plot is commendable on its own and should be respected. There are a few things that I personally find that make this book hard to read such as the fact that because of the time skip and information dump that happened in the beginning the chapters so fat fell choppy. ( basically the story doesn’t really flow right and you jumping from one thing to the next too quickly) besides that this story so far is very detailed and has a very interesting take on the J. K. Rowling’s world combining many different little details that most fanfic writers often overlooked Recommendations to the author 1. To be honest I don’t think you should have started this book at the TriWiz tournament because it has the capacity to be a full length version and it will help readers understand what you have built into the Harry Potter world much better than a few paragraphs could ever hope to do. 2. Going by the poll you had readers do, write down a few notes on important events that have/will happen in your character’s journey along with plot points in the Hogwoart’s timeline that he will inevitably be involved in. 3. Never mind the hate comments. This is YOUR fanfic written by YOUR hand if some idiot has a problem with that tell them to write their own story 4. Constantly updating is always better than nothing. Even if you don’t have anything written tell your readers that the chapters are coming out soon. You could also write ahead of where we (readers) are in order to not have to worry about finishing a chapter so that we (readers) can get to it.

LV 4

NiceReviewer

3 / 5 Honestly some things are amazing in this novel. Some very interesting ideas and some great scenes and events happen. On the other hand the author made up this parallel world of Harry Potter and he just assumes we "get his version" of the world. Next to nothing gets explained and you get small pieces of information and have to piece things together. MC is some kind of inhuman chinese novel MC who is involved in EVERYTHING, who is in charge of EVERYTHING, who achieved EVERYTHING, knows EVERYONE and is regarded as a harem protagonist. His friends too are just insane even though they are all non canon characters. You only get a small glimpse of his time at hogwarts. You never read a day in his life or get his relationship with most OG characters. This is very hard to read and not very rewarding imo. Overall this is not my kind of fic.

LV 5

Rak

ill give it 4 stars, its a good start to the book, mc is 3 years older than harry and there are changes he made in hogwarts and how it works but most of it happened in a time skip. now we just started the tournament arc, lets see how it goes

LV 14

grimmhorizon

haven't read it. just looked at the notes but to give future readers a heads up. harry is Harriet potter ,so beware.

LV 14

Supreme_Order

Hope some ROB yanks you into your MC. Then you will really enjoy.

LV 4

crimsoncobra97

So far its pretty good, the mc has some problems he's dealing with rn, so far things are not clear enough but it looks promising. Just one question for you. Will there be romance in this fic

LV 4

BoOk_LoV3r_429

The mandatory five star review, but due to the inconsistent update stability, it's gone down. So, ⭐⭐⭐⭐ overall.