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"Mr Liu Wei.."
Liling paused as she took In a deep breath. "I need one million yuan... "
Liu Wei shifted his gaze to face her. His face bore a surprised expression. 'What was she using that much money for?'
Liling who was anxious held the helm of her gown tightly. She swallowed hard and continued courageously. "I don't think I can pay back..., but I'll give you something else"
Her voice drained of all vigour. It was really hard to give herself away, so easily but she had no choice. Taking in a deep breath, she lifted her eyes to look at him. "My body..." ...
‘’Jin Yue, please wait.’’ Jin Yue suddenly stopped in his tracks, he badly wanted to look back but at the end he decided against it. ‘’Speak, I’m in a hurry.’’
‘’Jin Yue, throug the time we spent together, did you ever, even for a split second, love me?’’
Jin Yue froze when he heard her question. Did he love her? From the moment he set his eyes on her, he had loved her. She had stolen his heart away that even right now, he wanted to kneel and beg her to stay with him.
But he wouldn’t tell her that. If he wanted her to stop feeling guilty, he would not tell her. She should hate him so she would be happy with the one she loved.
‘’No; not even for a split second, so Miss Xin Yong, stop being delusional and scrap every memory you have of me.’’ ...
This is a story of two couples and the hurdles they meet in their journey of love and how fate tries to bring them back together. I hope you like it.
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Nice and calm and sweet moments for the main characters as well as their friends... im still in chapter 34 and this is what im feeling as of now.. keep it up author.. i just stop reading just to give you a nice review coz you really deserve this.. dont mind the rankings, your novel is beautiful... hope you keep on writing or finished this novel coz i really had enough encountering beautiful novels but being dropped off...muwahhh muwahhh goodluck author.. now back to reading your novel..
When i opened that novel i seriously didn't know that i would fell in love with with this. I don't know how to express but this story always attracts me it keep me in suspense all the time i read it... The main leads are very much same in there backgrounds. The other leads are also having an itresting story which i love a lot of i seriously recommend this novel to all. Daily i earn some ss and only spend them on this novel only no matter what i what daily i make me free for atleast an hour to just to read the chapters of this novel.. Love it.. Hope the author would continue to make such loving chapters
This review is part of a review swap and valid as of chapter eight. Eight chapters means the story hasn't even left the beginning. We're still busy getting to know the characters and the setting. The story as such hasn't taken off at all. Think of this when it's time for the stars. It feels a little like a girl from the people meets her prince, in this case a member of the economic elite, -type of story. It's also way, way too early to say. I believe we've been introduced to the female and male lead plus another half a dozen supporting cast including a possible antagonist. That's all you can cram into eight chapters. Stars. Writing: Four stars. In fact the reading is pleasant, but wavering between present and past tense plus undisciplined handling of the third person limited point of view detracts. Updates. Eight chapters. Too few for an assessment. I'll hand out the five stars. Story: Four stars. One star yanked not because anything is wrong. The author basically had to pick one or two out of three; plot, character and setting. Plot turned out not to be the focal point of the start. I respect that and expect to see plot growing in importance later on. Character: Four stars. While characters have been given a little more work they're still kind of place holders we're supposed to recognise while the story settles in. One star yanked due to no error of the author's. I believe we'll have a fifth star here within another half a dozen chapters. World: Five stars. As I wrote earlier, I believe the author had to make a pick. The setting is splendidly painted in ****** sentences that frame scenes with a place we can experience as a reader. After eight chatper the stage is basically literally set. If possible, as characters grow more important and the plot tags along with the characters, I can see the setting taking a back seat until it drops to a four star setting. Lastly, this is the beginning of the beginning. That makes it extremely difficult to review. I simply have no idea where this is going. Had I been given another eight chapters I believe either story or character would have gained an extra star.
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I'm thrilled by the plot of this story. New work that will keep you awake at night.... Any new reader out there. This piece is for you. But we need more chapters, Ziyanmei.
What should I say, the story is real good. Looking forward for me dramas in the next chapters. I strongly recommend to readers out there. ZiYanMei we need new chapters, or rather mass release!!!
This author, unlike other authors I've read their works, didn't start with the ML and FL at first, she starts by explaining details view of the lives of both of them. This work, I'll recommend to any new reader. Thumbs up Ziyanmei.
The story's great. I like the storyline it was simple but straight to the point to understand the lives of the main characters. I like the chapters. Hope to see many more. And I also think it can be turn into a drama.
Dear author I like the way you are bring up this novel please keep it up its so interesting I like it and hope much more drama from your story.I really love it and do forget mass release am looking forward to reading the next chapters so awesome thanks for the novel 💕💕💕💗
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Wow what a cute development of Xinyong ang Jie Yue . Looking forward to their love story but how can she cope up with her sweet innocence over the ******* Jie Yue and Eva's revenge.
I like the novel ..it's a face slapping story with handsome male lead...I wish that female character find her happiness. If some prefers to read a cliche, sweet romantic novel then this is it
I am so in love with this book!!!!! You all should totally read it like omg!! I can't get enough someone helpppppp!! I wish it was easier to make some $$ but woot!! Totally recommend! 💙💙💙
This is a very enthralling book. It is about two separate, but intertwined, love stories. There is heart wrenching drama for both couples, but friendship and faith will win out in the end. It is a very good read.
Great and interesting novel i totally love the book and hope the author improves with the characters image ,dear author you are really doing a nice work in this book no grammatical errors instead it is perfect english ,keep the good work and i would like you to be more explicit in ML and FL sex scene i love those stuff😉😉
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Story is getting good every single day I just love everything about the plot.🖤🤗🖤🤗🖤🤗🖤🤗🖤🤗🤗🖤🤗🖤🤗🎎🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🤗🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤💫.love it love 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😊😊💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖This is so good that it has me keeping my legs close but this awesome keep up the good work.!!!!!!!!so sad!!!!😭😭😭😭😭😭I am ready for the update please don't forget about me this is a beautiful book!!!!💖💖💖🥰🥰🥰😍😍🥰💖💖😍🥰💖💖💖🤗🤗🤗
Omggggggggggggg if u haven’t read this book already or are having doubts YOU NEED TO READ THIS BOOK RIGHT NOW GO NOW WHY HAVENT U GONE YET YEAH U BETTER
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Story is getting good every single day I just love everything about the plot.🖤🤗🖤🤗🖤🤗🖤🤗🖤🤗🤗🖤🤗🖤🤗🎎🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🤗🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤💫.love it love 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😊😊💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖This is so good that it has me keeping my legs close but this awesome keep up the good work.!!!!!!!!so sad!!!!😭😭😭😭😭😭I am ready for the update please don't forget about me this is a beautiful book!!!!💖💖💖🥰🥰🥰😍😍🥰💖💖😍🥰💖💖💖🤗🤗🤗
Omggggggggggggggggg this book got me in my feellllllssssssssssssss. This is my favorite boookkkk on this apppppp So much emotions!!!!!!!!
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I normally don't like reviewing but I desperately want to say something about this story......This story has potentials to become one of the best.... There's something in this story that's lacking in many of the stories I've reqd so far.... -This story is not wordy and that's one great quality of a good writer... -The grammar and the likes are very much good.... -Also,it seems you Author has total control over the story and not letting the it lead you astray... Truthfully, am not saying this is the best story out there but all what want to say is that,You're doing great...keep it up...Kudos Author....And all the best!!!! And YES am not rating five stars because others are doing it.......but because you and the story deserve it...!
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I was writing, then remembered I didn't give the author's ratings. Of course five stars. I don't know if you like my book, just read on. I know it is slow in development but don't crucify it yet. There is much more drama on the way. I love my readers. So I'll try to update as fast as possible. Thanks for giving this dry book a chance. Love y'all.