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A Hogwarts Tale: Twin Prophecies
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A young man is reincarnated into the Wizarding world, as the twin sibling to Harry Potter, but unbenownst to everyone the prophecy to defeat the dark lord, like his wand has a twin, one that should be heeded by all but ignored by many. Can the cast-away child reclaim his birthright and save the magical world from the actions of his Twin Brother?
**Harem will be included** + Heavily messing with the timeline while keeping major events as close to what happens in the real publications.
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Author Review here, ive honestly been working on this one only for about a month now, as a bit of a break from my regular stuff to try and keep myself active in writing but also getting a break from my usual go to stuff. Im going to try and do a mass release at first, and then around 2-3 chapters per day for the first bit to gauge interest. I just dont want to get to invested in this piece if the interest isnt there, i want to compete not get slaughtered like in the last contest where the results were clear by the end of the first week.
I actually like the idea and the story, the premise has real potential. But the writing style wears me down. It’s not just that it’s being used a lot; it’s that this particular style is used for everything. Every paragraph feels like it’s reaching for cinematic grandeur. Every sentence wants to be the trailer shot. At first it’s arresting, the rhythm, the momentum, the weight behind every line. But after a while, it becomes exhausting. When everything feels momentous, nothing actually does. Beyond that, this style doesn’t really fit the tone of the Harry Potter universe. The original books balance wonder with wit and quiet emotion; this feels like it’s trying to turn every walk down Diagon Alley into a prophecy. At first it’s striking, but when every scene reads like this, the story starts to lose its texture. You stop feeling awe and start feeling fatigue.
This fanfic is about a reincarnator who is a genius, dragon among men, softly spoken, world acknowledged, strong, pure of heart, big dicked, lucky, quietly intimidating, smooth walking, destiny favored, clear skinned, miracle worker, tidy eating, heaven touched, charming smiling, evenly tanned, chosen one, calm, admired widely, steady handed, natural scented, polite, fate blessed, good whistling, gentle auraed, smart, solid footed, pure intentioned, flattering lit, humble arrogant, rested looking, neat haired, patient, smooth moving, radiant vibed, confident gazed, virtue filled, golden chosen, remembered names, perfect blinked, tidy styled and generally existing as a cosmic exaggeration of human perfection. He is so incredibly special, I can't rate him 5/5, that would only stain his existence.
This is one if not of the best Hp fics I have read on this app so keep dropping chapters so I can keep giving you power stones👌🏾👍🏽🥰😁
Had a good start with some good world building and a good Mac, but the all of the sudden he gets a system from nowhere. If you are into that then go ahead, just wanted to warn fellow non system enjoyers
This is my first review ever, but I had to write one after reading this story. I am trying to be nice, and I don't want to discourage the author, but this is horrible. Writing quality like the grammar is bad. However, I don't really care about that when I read a story. What gets me is that the story is the worst. This story has no consistency at all. The main character knows everything. In the first couple of chapters, he has taken over the muggle world from the shadows. Keep in mind he is like 4. No one finds out! No one investigates who his persona is! Think about how stupid that is. Then he goes to the magic world and suddenly out of nowhere he knows all this magic and information. Keep in mind he was exhiled at birth from the magic world. Sure, him being reincarnated and reading the Harry Potter books in his past life gives him leeway, but this is too much. Honestly, I couldn't keep reading after that. I love op mcs, but this is not it. Instead, the author makes every other character in the story have an iq of -100.
a broken child who wishes to show his mother and the world why they shouldn't have hurt him. an Emo child who knows all and does all. creating empires before the age of 4. its all a bunch of nonsense. most definitely will be another orphan slytherin. this is just a big mess.
love the premise of this novel, keep uploading and you can have all my power stones
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One of the best ho fanfic that has me hooked and waiting for updates, my first book that i have waited to read after every update as i usually leave the book to accumulate chapters before reading but this one hits different. love it. keep going .[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The wildest and most elegant ideas are our products. Humanity should experience all the disgusting hypocrisy without any moral and logical restrictions (I think most movies, TV series, books and fiction should be like this = so that you can do what you want as you want without being influenced by religion, culture and political environment). And this story offers you a main character who can literally bend reality with your magic power and twist it in any way you want.
Good story so far, you almost lost me when you brought in the system, but I like how it is not OP and tied to his mana storage. But if he is meant to be a bringer of balance, he will also need a teacher of light to make sure he does not go all Mephisto on everyone. Please not dumb-ledor, I like how you went cannon with him, but seriously, I think everyone would prefer a new wise old person to guide him. Maybe McGonagall? Oh, is that way you gave him the ghost? And please let him give his mother the shaft, but that may make this story darker than you would like. As would probably giving simp-dad a crash course on reality.
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One of the best Fic I've read as of late. Absolute perfection🤌🤌🤌👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
I’m really enjoying this and hope you complete it currently I’m all caught up with all 128 chapters and the story is good I like the kingdom building that’s happening in the background how you expanded upon the magical world and how magic is used the only thing is like is for the MC and Harry to have a better relationship they are twins and we get so many stories where Harry and his brothers are fighting and I don’t want that for them I think they would make a good team if he can get some influence over him
This is one of the best HP stories written but iIthink you shouldn't have added the extra house of draconic. The story would have been great with following cannon four houses
The story is mildly entertaining but there are many inconsistencies and major plot holes. Also the writing is bad, every chapter has multiple typos. The only positive is the update frequency.
I normally don’t do reviews and haven’t read much but so far loving what you have here please continue. Will try to do a proper review later but wanted to let the author know good job and thanks.
accidentally found this and love it. you are missing out on a good hp fic if you pass it up.
Keep going, very good so far. ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
It's not a fic, it's a joke. Not a funny one, but still. Timeskip where mc manages to do... what? Several nobel prices, few hundred inventions, multibillion-dollar company before he is four. Yes four(4). From the orphanage where everyone either hates him or doesn't care, without a PC and internet -because at least check when it was invented, no cross that - became widespread. I'm not gonna ask you how that creature managed to make new political party in Britain and made it win. If you want to write power-fantasy make it at least somewhat believable. Also - MORE STRETCHING. Seriously, that looks like schoolkid homework where teacher grades based on number of pages - half of lines have 1-5 words and most of them is just water.
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