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(REWORKED VERSION)
This is a Rework of my previous story with some slight changes, improvement to the grammar, and improvement to the story overall. Some things will be the same of course and then some things will be different.
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Maximus was the son of the smartest and most powerful people in the world. His Mom and Dad being geniuses made advanced technology that boosted the world's development level but also caused more conflict. After his unfortunate death he is reincarnated in the world of Game of Thrones and granted a system to guide him along the way
Follow Maximus as he tries and build an Empire in Game of thrones
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This Story will be faced paced and include Kingdom building and a Harem
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- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
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This fanfic feel like reading a summary.You caan't call this a story at all.There is no plot,no character development and no world exploring at all.Mc came with a plug-in which is a ll purpose powerful can do anything system.I don't mind Op Mc or wish fullfilling story what i do mind is a story which is not a story at all.
amazing story so far I'm really enjoying it and also so far it's been one of the best GOT Fanfics I've ever read about the harem I really want these girls to be added to the harem Arwen Galadriel Hèra, the daughter of King Helm Hammerhand I know the first two will be possible if it's the Lord of the Rings movies but I want the Lord of the Rings series to be adapted rings of power but I know that with the author's power everything is possible
Very good story but would like faster chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯
Very good story but would like faster chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯
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The story started nice with no too much b*******. The grammar is also okay with no mistakes that I would find. Unfortunately the flow rhythm were not too good, I found the pacing too fast and the system wasn't explained enough. I've read till chapter 10 and lost interest.
Writing quality: Grammar 4/5 (AI use) Style 1/5 (AI use) *AI use idk if it's just an assist or wholesale usage. Story Development: it's alright, in the many ASOIAF fanfics I've read this isnt one of the ones where it's offensively bad, but isnt great either but that's okay (IMHO) Character Design: they're AI genned World Background: Details are all over the place, changing every now and then, for a "Fan"-fic, the author doesnt seem to be an actual fan of the original work because they're putting characters in places where they wouldn't/shouldn't even be at in that time or characters that have certain ambitions that are way OOC.
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Very good story but would like faster chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯
Very good story that I love but hope for faster chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯
Povestea e bună bună dovadă scrisul e mai bine decât cea de înainte dar are nevoie de un harem cu cele mai frumoase femei Sansa Stark Margaery Tyrell Myrcella Baratheon Ygritte Arya Stark și Daenerys Targaryen.
five stars I'm really enjoying the story so far the parts about building a kingdom and conquering other lands are really cool and amazing
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The guy is stupid, bro. Straight up. He’s got a million-man army—a million. He controls the Vale, Dorne, half of Essos, dragons (talking ones too!), weapons that make Valyrian steel look like butter knives. He could take over Westeros in a week if he wanted. But what does this clown do? Marriage. Alliance. Over and over again—marriage, alliance, marriage, alliance. What the hell is this? This isn’t Game of Thrones, this is The Bachelor: Westeros Edition. He doesn’t want war. He avoids conquest. He fumbles the North, he fumbles the Vale—he fumbles everything. He has all the cards and folds like a coward. No strategy. No ambition. Just endless harem-building. And not even in a fun or clever way—he’s collecting women like Pokémon cards. Two, three, four? Nah, man wants more. That’s all it is. Harem, harem, harem. No battles, no tension, no plot. Just romantic alliances and political pillow talk. He has Essos. He could take the world. But instead? He’s playing diplomat and wedding planner. And don’t even get me started on that rating—4.7 stars? Either the reviews are fake or they’re deleting the real ones. Because this? This is brain-cell-killing garbage. Don’t waste your time. If you want to read about power, conquest, and real drama—go look elsewhere. This ain’t it.