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‘Is this… an interface?’
Despite having no knowledge of where he was, he was familiar with the system interface.
After all, it was oddly similar to the novel he closely followed.
But…
‘This doesn’t make any sense, I should have died already.’
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After a tragic accident, he found himself transmigrated inside one of his favorite novels.
He realized he was now Brandon Locke, an unfamiliar character, an extra.
Armed with knowledge about the future, Brandon now has to traverse this new world all on his own.
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I'm writing this review after reading 36 chapters and so far it looks really promising, but to go in depth a bit more:- 1.The writing quality is very good and I didn't notice any grammatical errors while reading, which is always a plus. 2.the upload schedule so far seems good and author is active on discord so you can go barrage him on there, if he ever stops uploaded. 3.As for the novel itself, I can't say much as it's just starting, but I really like the MC and his skill weaver ability, also his personality is pretty likeable, even the side cast seem developed and likeable, which I really enjoy. 5.Overall I would recommend this novel to anyone who's a fan of the the genre.
Review at chapter 63: The story is actually good and doesn't follow most cliché tropes. The main character isn't a beta who hides in the shadows all the time or decides to follow the plot or stay away from the protagonist of the book he was sent into. The story is still in its early stages, so there might be some things that are yet to be properly developed. The interactions with the characters though are really fun to read, as each one doesn't seem bland and has a personality that you would enjoy.
Since I'm helping the author edit, I have to leave a 5 star review. Author is a beast at writing, in just a day he'd finish 8 chapters already. Mass release your 50 stockpile when?
it's just average in my opinion cause there's nothing new here . The novel is about a teenage boy who used to read a novel but dropped it and died when he wanted to pick it up again and got transmigrated into an Extra's body ( Brandon )in the novel who might not actually be an Extra because he thinks the system he has was for the other Brandon The Extra's are pretty fleshed out which is really good . The system is a meh at best it has the ability to create any skill . The MC Brandon well he's not too smart I can't really blame him cause he was still a teenager when he got transmigrated but still a little bit of common sense is still needed which he doesn't seem to have The plot is not really good here's why -The MC wanted to steal a mask from the academy which is supposed to be the most prestigious and safest academy in the world but somehow his subordinate whom he asked to sneak into the academy when there was a party for the arrival of the new students and act as a waiter oh and you would think there would be security to stop him but no he somehow managed to sneak into the party in the academy with no prep time at all like the MC told him at the last minute . So he somehow managed to sneak into the academy blah blah blah started scouting the place where the mask is supposed to be looking for the security camera location and all that. Then the MC and him started sneaking into the place where the oh so great mask is supposed to be and again you would think for a valuable mask in a prestigious academy they would put more security but nope only two guards at the entrance of the place where the mask is supposed to be and MC great subordinate managed to distract them buy saying he wanted to use the toilet or whatever and the stupid guards followed him to take him to the toilet both of them for Christ sake so the MC was able to enter the place with ease . Honestly I get the author new that's why I'm stopping here and not saying more oh and the author is thinking of making a poll to make the his BLOOD RELATED SISTER his Love interest which in my opinion shouldn't even be considered at all . still gonna read it but once the poll is up and i see his sister name I'm out (Excuse my English )
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Just binged it. Some small inconsistencies, but overall, a very good read. Takes a somewhat cliche situation and changes it enough so it feels fresh. The MC is a bit bland, but to compensate, the other characters are more developed than they normally would be in an average Webnovel story. Would recommend it, not a waste of time. Writing Quality: ★★★★ -No obvious mistakes and an easy read. Story Development: ★★★ -Cliche but not borning. Character design: ★★★★ -Good overall, but should fletch out the MC some more. Update Stability: ★★★★★ World Background: ★★★★ -Actually interesting and more thought-out than normal novels.
I was so excited when I read first 10 chapter I wanted to review at that time but i control myself so that i can read more chapters and review properly so here's my review-- i am loving the current development of story the character there personality and also Gojo reference after so much time i found a good novel with good story I was so bored of reading other novels that I was thinking now good novels with nice story doesn't exist now every where is bad novel with same story of op mc,it's harem and bad development.but this novel is best it should be in at least top 5 of ranking this is a quiet different from other extra mc, transmigrated reader novels.i wish it had more chapters i am so excited to read new chapters,the mc is not like other who distant itself from protagonist and the skill of mc his nah i would win mentality everything I love about him the story is also progressing nicely , i am thinking of what can be improved in this novel but for now I can't seem to get what you improve because from my perspective it's a perfect I was thinking of what should be bad or should improved about this novel but I am not getting any thoughts for now and trust me i thought for so much time but i didn't get anything that was wrong or needed improvement for now this is my review I know there not much that the author can get from my review but is i reviewed . and any one reading this review to get idea if they should read it or not i am just saying read it give it a try its something new we don't get to see a lot in novel. GIVE MORE JUJUTSU KAISEN REFERENCE OR ANY OTHE ANIME. AUTHOR I CURSE YOU TO COMPLETE THIS NOVEL.
haven't read yet but looking at the reviews it seems pretty good.Wait I wanted to ask something.What is MCs type I mean like hero/anti hero/villain/anti villain? AND LAST QUESTION --
I feel the storyline and the way thinks progress is really good and organic.It is the beginning of the novel but i can confidently say the best are the characters, the author knows how to write them and the side charachters don't feel one dimensional.All in all, im excited to keep reading more and see how the novel continues.
So gooood! Each chapter keeping me excited to read what gonna happen next. Writing quality is clear enough to me to know what going on, and story just make me really curious how it gonna ends. I hope author will update daily it would be awesome. I adding this book to my library. Keep it up author!
I've really enjoyed it so far. Although academy novels are common these days, you can see that the author has made an effort to follow a different path from the others. What attracted me the most, without a doubt, was that the MC doesn't hide. Man, I was so tired of stories where the MC keeps hiding their abilities and pretending to be weak. In this one, even though the MC doesn't show all of their abilities, everyone knows that the MC is strong. Another thing I found interesting is that the protagonist doesn't follow the canon; from the beginning, he’s been messing everything up. This is the kind of protagonist we want to see! The author did an amazing job giving the MC this personality. I was hoping the MC would end up with both sisters, Rachel and Emy, but then I saw there’s no harem. I confess I was disappointed with that part, but I trust the author; he knows what he's doing.
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Despite a couple on instances where you have to ignore some illogical actions etc, the novels quite good. Though I am a little worried about the pacing that the and author trying to do to much to soon. For example, the main 6 characters are portrayed to be apart of the same friend group, but we don't see many instances where they hang out and build a repour and gain insight into there personalities and life goals, but instead we have multiple time skips where we are told that they hang out after school or at each others apartments but we rarely see it.
This book is actually pretty amazing.. Can’t wait to see how Brandon will become the world strongest in this world
I love the book author, keep up the awesome work. Also, if i may, how about a skill to lay the groundwork for the MC's lack of close combat capabilities.Martial god body: Passive growth skill which grants it's wielder 10x the result of physical training, whether of the body or weapon.Or something like that. The mc has an awesome cheat, he should use it not just for immediate situation but for building his foundation, that is covering up weaknesses. He doesn't have to take a particular path and accept its's weaknesses when he has a cheat.Anyway, just my opinion, thanks author.
Dear Author, I hope this review finds you well, before i do. from what i've read till now (65), this novel manage what most can't. It is able to balance between character development that allows us, readers, to get attached with the characters and its action. Moreover the power system applied is also intriguing what with skill crafting, affinities and the likes. I also like the fact that the mc is a mage cause that is rarely explored in novels but hitherto you mananged it well, which i hope it will continue. I am excited with the idea of brandon and raven becoming the apex of their respective field mage and duelist. i'm addicted now, sincerely fk you i need more chapter (i'm in your walls)
The novel is good and Im giving 5 Stars 'cause it doesn't hurt me to do so, well i really do like this novel. good work author
So far, this has been among the very few academy novels that actually have decent characters and little to no cringeworthy lines/interactions. Also heard there's only going to be 1 romantic interest so it's not going to be like TNE, that's already a plus in my eyes. Please don't drop this and keep cooking, Author 🙏
Even tho there are many novels with a similar plot, this one is just so well executed. Author doesn’t let the story progress to far without developing the Characters. He gives really good insight in the interesting characters he has shown so far. I love the kind of plot twist he implemented and hope he can somewhat keep up this insane update stability. Don’t overdo yourself but please keep updating :)
From what I've seen so far, this novel does have a lot of potential. Villain novels are quite garbage whereas extra novels are now being overtaken and corrupted by those Chinese authors. Luckily this one doesn't follow your Chinese troupe. The mc actually befriends the main character for once unlike all those other trash where you see him stealing all the main characters "chances" or fate. Now to talk about the novel, our mc is an average lad from Earth who got thrown into this Magical Earth. Unlike novels like The Novel's Extra and Author's POV, where the mc's are mocked for using strange weapons or doing weird actions, the mc in here is originally seen as a talented fellow. Even later on people don't usually look down on him or try to get into fights with him. On the other hand, the original mc of the novel is the person who is looked down even though he's Rank 1 which makes it interesting. The dynamics of this novel between the characters are good enough and.. I better see more chapters real soon or else, Author just know that you're going in my basement. This isn't a threat, I'm merely stating the future.