Fairy tail: the brother of erza

LV 15

Karstag

This is a really good story if you set aside the writing mistakes, some of the readers are b*tching about the writing quality and is ignorant at the fact that the author is using google translate to translate the novel. Just wanna say: Keep up the good work Author, I know your grammars and writing qualities are bad but you can learn along the ways and what not.

LV 13

Nunu_780

I really like this it’s better than a lot of them out there and also those earlier reviews when someone says that English isn’t their first language it means their still learning ***holes

LV 14

Kitsune_Raijin

To keep it simple, good idea, bad grammar. I recommend this to new people in the fanfic world, because if you have read many good fanfics you may not read this because of the grammatical errors and that would be a shame of a possible good history.

LV 4

amaturewriter

you know....look English might not be your main language but at least learn how to spell basic **** like she/he/they/her as the story is barely legible. If you cant even do this stop writing cause its essentially pointless. The readers can barely understand what you are writing and it wot matter even if you have a good story

LV 13

Xumit

I tried reading this... I really did... But I just can't do it anymore... The grammar is horrendous even for someone like me whose main language isn't English. Every chapter needs you to decipher their meaning 😑😨

LV 4

David_Drake

Its a cool idea and the beginning was cool. However, once the MC is able to slaughter 15 mages/warriors at ten years old with only HAKI I couldn't handle it much longer. Then comes the drop in grammar and the confusing POV switches of first and third person. By chapter 17 the MC hasn't even touched this worlds main power system and only utilizes One Piece crap powers to a great mastery. Mixing two worlds power systems never works out well as the author has already beefed up amd weakened the MC to fit the situation he finds himself in. I guess the only good thing in this fic is how well the MC personality stands out and remains consistent. Sadly the same can't be said about the 100 generic chinese villains he encounters on a regular basis. If you can handle poor grammar and genericness then you'll like this fic.

LV 6

Heavenly_Devil

This novel was something I would love to read.... IF ALMOST EVERY OTHER SENTENCE DIDN'T SUDDENLY CUT OFF! I would rate it better, even if the novel had terrible grammar, but sentences that aren't even complete are something else completely. There are certain things I can tolerate, but this isn't one.

LV 3

JackbladesFF7

It is just not that good honestly. I don’t know what else to say. There are so many errors and the story isn’t written that well. You might like this if it is one of your first fan fics

The MC has a jackass personally that I hate, and the author know it too but he doesn't change it. I mean how care if the MC dead in a old age. The saying goes the older you are the wiser you get. But no the MC doesn't care about any one, but him self. I mean he left his new sister alone to be a slave, while he off to kill people. I never reading this again. I am surprised that people like it. I mean he is not a human being inside, and in the first chapter he said we are all human being. 1STAR PEOPLE 1 STAR OR 0 STAR. BULL* IS WHAT I CALL THIS NOVEL.

LV 11

Dark19

El hermano de Erza👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌 Está muy buena la novela. 😆😆 -Recomiendo que la lean-😆😆😆😆😆👍👍👍👍👍🎊👍🎊👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 15

Mehmehmeh

The whole book is in broken AF English, nearly impossible to read. 🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁

LV 13

Kain

The grammar is terrible. Mc seems to be smart but relies too much on instinct. At one point he just stares at a character and reads their intention. Mc doesn’t seem loyal to anybody. Got offered a job by his jailors and just took it without further thoughts about his sister

LV 3

ISN

nice story but your language so bad,,well u can try improve for better grammar..its good story if u can do it,i know english not ur native but atleast try,good luck

LV 15

Dao_of_Sin

Even if you say that English isn't your first language there Is either application that you can download like Grammarly which can edit as you type to show you the errors in your writing or hell I've read other books that the author barely know English that someone offers to edit the story without any fees to fix these issues, but your story doesn't even offer any insight to the character or the stories world.

LV 13

D1cky_101

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LV 4

Miki_Marlo75

Very few fics like this one are really very few, most of them ruin them 3-4 chapters making them very op suddenly oh they change the story halfway sincerely I recommend it

LV 3

sdrwwe

Ami me gusto sigue actualizando solo que no lo hagas demasiado poderoso rápidamente se pierde la esencia es el error de muchos y también has que cometa errores se esfuerze y que resiba golpes

LV 4

FalseHope99

it is a great one if you can ignore all the shit grammar (no offense, it is what it is) at first i had my doubts and after reading others comment, i comfirmed that the author was using google translate so the grammar was all over the place, umderstandable. i would recommend this to those who likes a good story and have good patience to ignore the grammar and try to read the actual fan fic. its kind of a waste that good fanfic keeps getting these grammar problems ...

LV 4

reb1

i feel like you explain too much in the story not leaving room for exploration of characters and there growth plus i . feel like the calm reincarnated protaganist is a little cliche at this point doesn't have to be used all the time because to . much of something can sometimes ruin a story also i think the story is too fast pased and bit to confusing cause even if your not great with enlish atleast use grammarly to hepl flesh out the characters dialogue the characters seem more full and not half empty plus also i feel like a mother whos just birthed child even if shes basically immortal i think should still be quiet and just wanna enjoy holding children instead of saying a long speech and ruing the moment plus also the character feels to fourth wall breaking and if you want editor look me up on discord i'm at scanlater if you wanna reach me and i'll help you flesh out the characters if you want