I'm A Plunderer In The World Of One Piece.

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Karbit

Everything is fine, but there's one flaw I think needs to be addressed. The MC's cheat only gives him the ability to steal other people's devil fruit techniques and powers and make them his own. That may sound powerful, but this is the world of One Piece, where battles between powerful individuals can take days to be decided. Even using haki and devil fruit abilities requires a great deal of stamina and physical energy. It's been almost 60 chapters, but the MC has never been shown training physically and only trying to meditate to simulate battles in his mind. Honestly, this seems ridiculous to me.

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ram_

this is why I hate an op fic with mc joining the strawhat pirates cause mc will just do babysitting for the rest of the story also it was very identical with the original op

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Dorian_1192

The story is pretty boring honestly, I don't mind OP MC's this story is just ridiculous. When I read the title plunderer in One Piece I was expecting him to actually plunder skills from people but that doesn't happen. What the mc does is just glance at someone and then he has all of their abilities (including devil fruits), techniques, and skills/professions but a better version of what he took. At the very least I'd prefer he had to beat someone in a fight or kill them to take their stuff or even just watch them fight but NO, just a single glance and he's automatically a better version of whoever he looks at. That's just so boring because he dosent even have to work or do anything for strength other than open his eyes, and to top it all of the story is pretty much the same as canon with no real differences so far. At best the mc just takes some cool scenes from other straw hats and makes conversations but the general plot hasn't changed a single bit. I don't really see the point of stories like this so I'll be leaving a 1 star review

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Zphyrr

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Review: Alright, shameless 5-star review incoming! 😎 This fanfic is packed with world-building, character development, emotional depth, and action-packed scenes that’ll keep you hooked. Whether you're here for the plot twists, the power progression, or just the Op moment or whether you're here cos the word 'Plunder' caught your interest, there’s something for everyone. 🔥 Strong MC? Check. 💥 Epic battles? Check. 💔 Emotional moments? Oh yeah. ✨ No cringe, just clean storytelling. If you're tired of fanfics with repetitive cliches or rushed development, give this one a shot. I'm constantly improving and updating, and I take reader feedback seriously. So go ahead, add it to your library, drop a comment, and let’s build this journey together! 💬

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Olamias1

So far, so good. The Main Character just doesn't simply join the Straw Hat and become another Audience traveler. He walks his own path too.

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Vittorio_Dio

Shirogai Yamikuro is not a name, it's an abomination, pretty sure "gai" is not used in names and Yamikuro is wrong, right way is Kuroyami, also Shiro Kuroyami would mean White Darkness which is edge af. I couldn't resist writing this complaint, even tho novel is entertaining, the name makes me cringe

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Melshan

this is why I hate an op fic with mc joining the strawhat pirates cause mc will just do babysitting for the rest of the story also it was very identical with the original op.

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average_ff_enjoyr

This is the standard Powertrip story with the main character that at least has half of his brain functioning, 10 out of 10 will We'll continue to read

LV 13

ProudRaven

Unexpectedly good. The powers or system may be OP, many may not like them or think it's mainstream but... you don't have to take it seriously. So what if he can do everything better so far? He's a safety net (and much much more/ a friend that helps them grow), he can ensure the Strawhats have fun w/o dying. The interaction with the people is spot on, sometimes funny, sometimes serious; you can feel that he belongs with no cringe or forced dialogue. I always liked a MC that's not flustered, with a smirk or smile on his face. It's too early to say if it's gonna follow 100% canon but I think it's good. Just his presense should change things up. Keep it up, you are doing great. Peace. I'm going back to read

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R1y0n

Already on the 4th Chapter and is pretty good keep going author 👍🏾

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DaoistlYDdVW

La historia es entretenida pero demasiafo absurda, el mc es demasiado op para su propio bien, literalmente sin rivales si el mc tuvieta el fin de medaca y sus limitaciones, o si se introdujeran contrapesos al mc la historia seria mas profunda y emocionante pero esta historia trats de tomarse mad encerio que comicamente y por eso a mi forma de ver falla, pero si solo buscas algo absurdo en one piece ests es tu historia

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Wikramadani

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AlastorGF

Existen protagonista OP y luego está este monstruo, solo tiene que mira nada más y ya tiene los poderes del que está mirando sinceramente que sentido le ven a este fanfic porque leer algo así es realmente aburrido, no hay desafíos ni siquiera problemas que le cuesten al MC, todo sale perfecto es más entretenido ver los Power Rangers que este fanfic bye

Hi, I’m Fleming! I just finished your story and absolutely loved it your characters, pacing, and atmosphere played out like a film. Your writing naturally lends itself to visual storytelling, and I’d love to help bring it to life as a comic or graphic novel. I’m a professional Comic, Character, Webtoon, and Cover Artist currently open for commissions. No pressure at all just an open invitation to collaborate! Feel free to connect on Discord: patricia_castillo55 Looking forward to exploring the possibilities with you!

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DaoistF827PI

Good job yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes

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DetectiveJones

First ill start with the MC. He's Super Op (which isnt a problem) but he pretty much just looks at someone and copies their whole flow bar for bar so fights feel more like the MC showing off other characters powerful techniques just enhanced a bit. One glace and this dude can pretty much solo a Admiral or Emperor chapter 1 no training or anything yet why does he insist on following the Straw Hats to the point of actively scene stealing and again kinda just showing off. Story Mostly follows cannon with the MC babysitting and jumping in at every opportunity, and when they need an excuse to follow cannon, they just have the MC going off to do his own thing from time to time away from the Straw Hats. I mean the MC alone is known as a fifth Emperor yet he's still a member of the Straw Hats? That said, the translation isnt terrible and updates are frequent so good job on that front i guess. Hate on the novel not the translator. lol

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Lions_King_0942

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vonder1

What can I say? It's pretty much the same as all the one piece OP fanfics there are. I was initially interested in the idea of "plunder", I thought that the MC would defeat the enemy first before getting the abilities but this certainly did not meet my expectations. It is an OP character done wrong, the idea of just looking at the character then get the abilities is too boring.

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Lions_King_0942

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