I am Krillin!(Completed)

LV 15

Nixs_Sins

I'll be straight up 100 with you I did not read this novel. I'm giving this a 5 out of 5 rating oh, you want to know why I'll explain. Writing quality? Don't care I didn't read it, yet. Story development? You ham sandwich this is about Krillin you can only make his story better as the strongest human of the DBZ universe. Character development? You flippy Flopper do you not know this is Krillin it's time for him to shine with all his bald Glory! World development? It has Krillin in it but the best development there is. Stable updating? Time is beauty time is perfection there's no need to rush with Krillin 😩👌

LV 6

newthings

5 stars for the image XD //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

so dissapointing ... i just cant help but get annoyed on this because i want the mc have his own adventure not just follow and watch the story .. him being with goku every chapter is just annoying . butterfly effects sometimes is unreasonable dont just power up everyone because mc is there he doesnt even do anything to power up them. and hes like a kind of person that will do anything just to help people . he can kill himself just to help people haixt.waste of time,, wondering why so many people give this 5 stars

LV 4

Kurosis

Never read a krillin fanfic before. Im hyped. Please don’t disappoint. And dont make me have to delete the 5* rating Gl and ty ...............................

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LV 5

Precheur

I came to see the strongest human krillin, i only saw someone trying to be a sayian without saying the word. At this point, shouldn't you just makke a sayian story ?........................................................................................................................................

LV 11

AdrianVeidt

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LV 5

n740

it was very good until i heard the word harem ##################################################################################################

LV 14

Brian70707

Had potential but ruined. Mc became to op way to quickly by relying on dragon balls makes story boring for me. 140 characters 140 characters

LV 4

MALAKITITI

The wish really makes me drop this 😑😑😑 He just waste a wish just for a fvking height. And author didn't even bother giving mc some unique skills .he just want the mc to copy every skills in that dbz world

LV 10

Termiii

not trash but the author likes to change the personality and powerlevels of most characters which is a game breaker for me. ---------------------------------------

LV 13

Lardeen

Too much rushed story I dont like MC. Its same issue in The True Legendary Super Saiyan story. I wouldn't recommend it anybody. //////////////////////////////////////////////// //////////////////////////////////////////////

LV 3

OtherworldlyEggy

Shitty ending ruined it all !wtf is dat ending ?Ffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffftffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff

LV 6

H_Alex

Meh. It's just mediocre at best. If you came looking for something original, no luck here. If you've watched DBZ Abridged, then you already know all of the jokes present. As one reviewer said before, MC is a guy trying to be Saiyan without saying the word. What made dbz interesting to watch is hype before and during the fight, to won't see it here, as mc is almost always stronger (good irl, but not here)

LV 5

Apocalypse_

Get creative with the wishes. Ask for suggestions if you can. Involving the readers is always a good plan so as to maintain yourself at the level you are at. Also, slow down on updates a bit if you want. Stockpile chapters a lot. Make excuses for taking breaks- exams, not well, travelling, etc. and stockpile chapters. About the core novel itself, there isn't much I'd like to say. There is hardly anything to 'improve' and only stuff you can add. Your novel's pace is perfect. Not fast and not too slow either. Vegeta and Nappa haven't even arrived yet I never felt your novel is going slow. I can see you're building pillars to support your castle(novel) later; you're doing solid groundwork for smooth transition of your novel through each Arc. Just don't forget one essential thing. The 'Butterfly Effect'. Let MC face some unexpected, non-canon, challenging situations just like Cooler and that demon thing. Good luck for your story. May the Force be with you.

LV 11

bla_blupp

Be aware will become harem. So just so you now and those that hate it not waste time. Was good until then. ByyyyyYyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

LV 5

AnAxeToGrind

Author Dragon ball wishes this book into trash. Read first 10 chapters then act like the author dropped the book and you will be doing yourself a favor.

LV 4

Figurante

This is what is expected of a fanfic harem; op character and stupid stuff. É o que se espera de uma fanfic harém; personagem op e coisas estúpidas.

LV 14

Ghost_Playing

Krillin has a nose BUT no nose holes…so he breaths through his skin and mouth?

LV 4

READERAkuma

He has nose right, but we can't just see it, right guys, Plz say yes, ahahhahahahahahhhahahahahhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa