I was reincarnated and all I have is a book?!!? [Dropped]

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Lord_Banned

I have to of course give my book a 5/5 rating, a shameless author like always, if you have any questions ask away and I will most likely answer

LV 3

Skrivagner

This fic is nice. Why ? - The story is fast paced, but it's well done. It leaves out the boring childhood arc. - Romance without harem. The fmc is also an underrated waifu (harem in MHA just feel weird so I'm happy that the author choose to not do it) - the author shows a different perspective of Mineta, which is nice cuz habitually he is just a annoying and useless pervert. Here, the author write a little about the point of view of the previous Mineta and his childhood - writing style is good without being fantastic (it does the job) - not enough chapters to know but I think that the author will explore the rest of the world and not just Japan (there are a few allusion to it, I hope it will happen) I don't usually like system cuz there are too op, too boring, too... you get it so it bugged me a little in this story but it's in fact quite well done. The system is not too op (but still really op), you don't have stats sheets, you don't have mission the system doesn't talk... it's actually quite nice. Thanks for keeping me entertained author and keep the good work!

LV 4

maxphantom

this is good. no other reason

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Yana_Ajime

this is exciting for some reason ......... I want more[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Chintu_Mane

goodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodvv

LV 4

maxphantom

Has potential. I will wait and see which direction does this go. But overall this is good for now

LV 14

skyhound

Pretty entertaining and refreshing MHA Fanfic. The author skipped having the standard baby reincarnation and jumped right into the plot. Which I appreciate since we can jump into MHA canon and start changing things. Mc is pretty cool, pacing and grammar is good too. keep up the good work author 👍

LV 4

Y0G_S0TH0TH

It's not that bad of fanfic. It just needs a lot of polishing to do. My advice is to get an editor. Most of the story seems like a list of things happening and there isn't a proper flow to the story. The characters could be fleshed out a bit more for better enjoyment as it seems like they are more 2d than real-life characters. The 'book' needs a better in-depth explanation rather than a tool of convenience. If you fix all the above mention points I think this could be a wonderful read. Keep up the good work👍

LV 6

LeviathanJr

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Aden_Sky

keep it up author san ......................................................................................................................