Legendary Player In A Game-Like World

LV 3

Anime_watcher_0811

First of all the review will be a bit low due to the story being new and fresh.The writing quality is good tho it can still improve which is a good sign, and the story development can still be adjusted as it's moderate in my opinion but this is normal and you don't need to change that really much, go at your own pace. I'll be rating the character design as 1 start cause there's practically nothing(correct me if im wrong) but the stability is the good thing about this i think? 2 stars for the world background because you haven't expanded on it yet. Overall the storys's potential is 8/10 for me can the low aspects can be improved further as the story continue to develop.

LV 15

mujaki2

In the beginning, the story doesn't stop with action and character development. You get a sense of teamwork and survival. When a larger group is joined there are hints of how the MC and group will work together. but the focus switches to battle and the mc grows stronger. The new characters don't seem as fleshed out and are not described as much. The battles become the main focus and are so detailed they seem be repeating. eght months ago as of this writing 6/28/24 the updates ended. it's really too bad because I was looking forward to seeing how his Archer friend would compete with the healer girl or accept her as a sister for the MC's affection. Even the hints that the red haired guild leader would try to gain his attention. the set up is there for a nice long enjoyable story. but it is currently in hiatus