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*Re-write*
Arthur Greyhound a hitman who really loves his job is killed on the job after a 'tiny' mess up, and as he embraces the cold embrace of death he only has one thought.
'Fuck I wish I finished that novel.'
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- คุณภาพของการแปล
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
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Very unfortunately, the MC decides to become a servant halfway through the story (for the lulz? To make the future plot easier to write?), which ruined it for me. If you like evil, psychopathic MCs who actually kill everyone instead of playing lip service to being a villain, this is a great, but unfortunately the author made some questionable decisions down the line that made me drop it.
Grammar is a 10/10. …………………………………………………………………………………………….……………………………….. …………………………………………………………………………………………….……………………………….. …………………………………………………………………………………………….……………………………….. …………………………………………………………………………………………….……………………………….. …………………………………………………………………………………………….……………………………….. …………………………………………………………………………………………….……………………………….. …………………………………………………………………………………………….………………………………..
Rewrite Author here to give an unbiased review. • The Mc is a psychopath killer that loves to kill, but he doesn’t just go around destroying innocent civilizations. • He starts off weak, but becoms OP fast. • The romance hasn’t appeared as of yet(chap 11). • There are quite a bit of OC’s that will be added into this ff. • The start takes place little above 3,000 years before canon. • Tensura is kinda like the building ground for the mc to do things past just going to anime worlds as I want him to have a goal, although I don know what that goal is yet. • Done. • Now all in all this ff is absolutely garbage I wouldn’t wish it on anyone, so if you continue don’t complain to me complain to your mother and yourself for not listening to advice
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Solid 10/10 I haven't read a novel for many months, weeks, and days. Hopefully, I'm not getting rusty. Inside the contents of the novel is pretty fine and done well. Good job👍
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I think, Mc's characteristics in this fic are a bit too much, so it makes the story a little weird. But, still like this fic, it's just that you have to improve it a little