omni mythical inhuman god

LV 3

Overpoweredchosen

ok author i see that you are new to this but the story is going to fast and to make things worst is the there are alot of errors so i have to help you 1)when your write dont rush or the words will come out wrong 2)space our you words when writing and when someone is speaking 3)pronounce dont forget this it is very important for authors so i have a task for you and that is to rewrite all the chapters and make them more understandable i know you might get mad or get sad for having someone tell you the error you make but that is what viewers are for so dont take this the hard hard way plus you have views who are still interested in the story but that's all for now have a good day🤗😄😊😀

LV 4

Kazuki190

no problem is hard to see this kind of novel all in all good and please don't drop this like the other novel please

LV 4

Finadable2leader

I story has lots of potential but I can’t understand it half the time. The hole story needs to be rewritten