The Era of the New King

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Barbadana

Nice imagination! 👌 The build up of characters, interacting with the environment is superb! I can't wait for the next chapters to unfold. Let's see how it goes

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Livylivalive

The story does well to in building our desire to watch the rising legend of our main character the queen. The story is packed with descriptions and good for someone who wants actions along with details. If you’re searching for a female monarch, or specifically their run for power, this is for you!

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DimeToner

While it's taking a lot of time to update (Which I think the writer has reasons for), the story in itself is captivating. A lot of hands-on explanation and details, subjective imagination... I'm not yet getting the suspense. Let's see though🤔

It's a good start, hoping on seeing what next!!! what I see here is that, it's very detailed and it could make the chapter voluminous but overall it's very good

I think the writer of this book has great imagination but the story needs good word usage and plot twist to make it more interesting. Someone or a writer who has more experience can buy the script and polish it to a better quality. Just my opinion. I will love to see how the story unveils with time.