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U should use the concept of them evolving to be caveman at the end

I understand that u didnt like ghe ranking So I think u should give a open ending to this part and start another book for the other part If u want later or not.

the concepts at least the next level after sovereign like god or whatever concepts should be much harder to master even though he is a genius cause he is to overpowered like this

just make a strong cast of side characters like red Strom if u have read it or one-piece the characters can be his brother, his disciples, or anyone else. I always give my 2 power stones to u for ur consistency and enjoyable story.