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Frustrating how the same trope used in the original terror infinity is being used here. Hope Sarah dies and fast. Had rare nitpickings with this fanfic so far but her relationship with Alex take the cake.

A very pleasant surprise!! Welcome back, great to see you are in better health.

I would prefer if you went with - Baki universe It’s top fighter level are not as high as the kenichi but the characters and fights are better developed. Likewise the martial arts exploration is much better.

There was no need for the racist dialogue within the chapter. Also plz add a brief background summary of the team as an index, I am having difficulty remembering the players. On another note, I like that you’ve taken full advantage of the first two mission worlds. One aspect that I think should be improved is the skill description and reason for purchase. Although I like the cultivation addition, I have difficulty appreciating it since you’ve yet to mention the benefits to any of the realms he’s broken through.

Sorry to hear that. Take care of yourself and rest well.