Why face?
"F-fine. I'll give you face this time. Let's go."
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อะนิเมะและการ์ตูน · BoydyTL
Woah, he became a woman out of shame! That face slap was more powerful than Davie504's holy slap!
The realization hit Luce like a brick. His heart pounded in her chest, her mind completely blank.
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คนดัง · B_A_3439
Caveman mentality?
Jason looked at Emma's updated "favorability" stats and inwardly grimaced at the lingering flaw in her record.
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คนดัง · B_A_3439
Damn, from sentence to sentence his identity changes, schizophrenia or something?
His mother's glare could've burned through stone."Kneel, Zachary Jr. Kneel—because tonight, you've signed the death warrant for this family."
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คนดัง · B_A_3439
Who are these guys?
Vice President Sun's secretary was attractive, but her competence was only average—and worse, she was clearly tied too closely to Sun. Risky.Manager Xiao's secretary was smart and hardworking, but plain and heavyset—not the type Jason would want representing him.The rest were unremarkable. Fine for general office work, but nowhere near qualified to stand beside the boss.
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คนดัง · B_A_3439
Still, bitterness clung to him. He snapped a photo of Holly clinging to Jason's back, then opened his phone and sent it to his friend, Chenyang.
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คนดัง · B_A_3439
Good enough I guess, it would be better if we could get an information page stating the names of the characters, their alternate names, their misspelled names, and the 10 or so family names the MC has had so far so that I could follow properly.
Poor Jason, his family name changes every chapter, he no longer knows who he is.....
"Sounds absolutely perfect," Jason typed confidently. "I'll wire $200,000 immediately. Just inform them Jason Miller is coming."
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คนดัง · B_A_3439
Sounds good, that way you can add more of your ideas
If you're on board with a rewrite, let me know in the comments or reactions. Your feedback will decide whether I push through with it or keep going with the current version.
NBA: Basketball Legend.
คนดัง · FanficLord03
Yen, not yuan, they are in Japan
Twenty thousand yuan meant nothing to someone like Rio Futaba.
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อะนิเมะและการ์ตูน · BoydyTL