Enjoyteddy

1yr

Commented

Awesome! Keep up the great work man, I can’t stop reading!

ch 42 The Expedition Package

Star Wars VRMMO: Galactic Expedition

Games · N3wman

Enjoyteddy

1yr

Posted

This is really awesome! It’s definitely one of the better written fictions on this site and I like the concept behind it. If your looking for something fun give it a try! Keep up the great work author!

Star Wars VRMMO: Galactic Expedition

Games · N3wman

Enjoyteddy

2yr

Commented

This is an interesting new take and I’m excited to see where it goes!

ch 0 4 Chapter 4

Deleted. Erased from existence. #1

Anime & Comics · TheMotherLand

Enjoyteddy

2yr

Commented

Awesome! I hope you are feeling well and taking care of yourself!

ch 11 A Brother in Arms

Harry Potter, The Martial Master

Movies · BeaulenSmith

Enjoyteddy

2yr

Commented

Nice job 👍

ch 0 2 [Rewrite]

Naruto: Reincarnated as Sakura [Reboot]

Anime & Comics · SuperDemonWriter

Enjoyteddy

2yr

Commented

Good job keep it up!

ch 0 9 Chapter 9: New Friend!

Sharingan in MHA [Complete]

Anime & Comics · Yellow_Duck_Toy

Enjoyteddy

2yr

Commented

Yea you jump to much I would have rather you stuck with the tournament. I like the story otherwise.

ch 19 Myrddin’s Journey (430 AD)

Magical Marvel (HP X MCU)

Book&Literature · athass_prkr

Enjoyteddy

2yr

Commented

This is really good! Keep up the great work!

ch 0 3 A Path To A Better Future

Training is for Inferior Ninja

Anime & Comics · GreenDragon1222

Enjoyteddy

2yr

Commented

Great job keep it up!

ch 0 8 Ch.7 Night Time Raid 1

Star Wars-Nature of the Force

Anime & Comics · Vaekyr

Enjoyteddy

2yr

Commented

Nice, keep it up!

ch 21 Ambush

Naruto: The Dragon’s Successor

Anime & Comics · Falsic

Enjoyteddy

2yr

Commented

Umm I already have a mother and I love her very much. But I could use a remodel. Ahhh I’ll just have to have two! Keep up the great work!

ch 48 Remodel

Soul Fusion Online

Games · invayne

Enjoyteddy

2yr

Replied to f3f3

Yea practice makes perfect. And if you found a bunch of mistakes by rereads then just do that once or twice be for posting. But in any case keep up the good work and don’t get discouraged!

ตอนนี้ถูกลบแล้ว

(Writing new fanfic)

Book&Literature · f3f3

Enjoyteddy

2yr

Commented

Ahhh cliff no one likes you!

ch 38 Player Killing Part 1

Soul Fusion Online

Games · invayne

Enjoyteddy

2yr

Commented

Ahhhh more!

ch 12 Power up

In Naruto With Gamer System

Anime & Comics · Bakorio

Enjoyteddy

2yr

Commented

Man i really like your story’s, but you need to use grammerly or something. A lot of the mistakes would be easy for a word processor to fix right up and take your story to the next level. I will keep reading and enjoying your story and look forward to your improvement.