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Thanks for the chapter, hopefully your allergies will let up soon. As for the POVs, I don't really have any that I would absolutely like to see, that being said, I don't mind seeing things from different perspectives.
ch 95 Alternate POVs: Pre-Chunin Exams
This Isn't Canon! (Or that time I reincarnated into an AU-Naruto)
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I thought we had managed to kill them all, / I thought we had managed to wipe them all out,* either would work.
Staring at the folder of this 'Guren' the one who claimed to be the Head Shinobi and Leader of Otogakure, he was indeed slightly impressed. A young woman, not quite yet 20, and yet she was already a Kage-level Shinobi, particularly impressive considering she did not come from one of the Great Five. 'This Kekkei Genkai will be particularly annoying. The last time I had to deal with Crystal Release was in the First War, I thought we had managed to kill them all out, she's even stronger than her old clan head...'
This Isn't Canon! (Or that time I reincarnated into an AU-Naruto)
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Kimimaro* Not sure if it was misspelled in the earlier chapters as well, as I only noticed it in this one, last time I'll mention it though. Unless the paragraph has something else I point out.
A shiver went down Tayuya's spine as she hurriedly nodded. "Yes Kimimaru-sama!" She could piss off Orochimaru. She could piss off Kabuto or Guren. But Kimimaru? 'Never!'
This Isn't Canon! (Or that time I reincarnated into an AU-Naruto)
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black stud pierced into ??? flashed* word(s) missing.
Konan worried on her bottom lip thinking it over even as the black stud pierced into flashed in the office's light. A few moments passed before she said, "You think she's awoken the Rinnegan."
This Isn't Canon! (Or that time I reincarnated into an AU-Naruto)
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he'd shout out so that Konan could hear* extra 'could' there.
Sitting at his desk with a bland peaceful smile on his face, Nagato slowly worked through the paperwork, before pausing. "Konan!" Looking up he'd shout out so that could Konan could hear him, and a few moments later she came into his office from her own. "Yes, Nagato?"
This Isn't Canon! (Or that time I reincarnated into an AU-Naruto)
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took a quick glance at Gaara*
Her feet continued to move, even as she took a quick glance to Gaara - stonefaced, but not leaking bloodlust like he did in his toddler years. 'Sadly, Kankuro doesn't see what's wrong with this.' Glancing over at him, she could see a hint of excitement and bloodthirst in his eyes. 'He's taken everything wrong with father, and decided he should become like it...' she held back the sigh at the thought of her younger brother. 'I can't do anything about it - not yet at least. I just have to do my best to keep them safe, that's all that matters.'
This Isn't Canon! (Or that time I reincarnated into an AU-Naruto)
Anime & Comics · BalancedSelfInsert
You're welcome again. =)
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HxH: another kind of Zoldyck
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If you say so. =P
ch 0 5 Chapter 05: The Heavens Arena and I Want My Birthday Gift
HxH: another kind of Zoldyck
Anime & Comics · Soul_Eater_0252
No problem. =)
"That was surely your Tenkkai?" Zeno declared, looking at his fist and me.
HxH: another kind of Zoldyck
Anime & Comics · Soul_Eater_0252
Thanks for the chapters so far, looking forward to more. Though I'm not sure I agree about Leorio being cool... but he is a funny character for sure. =)
ch 0 5 Chapter 05: The Heavens Arena and I Want My Birthday Gift
HxH: another kind of Zoldyck
Anime & Comics · Soul_Eater_0252
Why would it be false laughter if he actually laughed? O.o
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HxH: another kind of Zoldyck
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and I not only kept them on during sparring* as there is a 'but' in the end, though I would probably switch the last two sentences around and say that he not only kept them on during daily life, but also during sparring. As the latter is the more extraordinary happening.
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HxH: another kind of Zoldyck
Anime & Comics · Soul_Eater_0252
In Chinese five elements lightning has mostly metal attributes which is why I said that it's metal attribute.
As predicted, Mihawk left the island the next day and Rayleigh went back to practicing. After a lot of meditation, Rayleigh picked five flows to fuse together and master. He chose Fire, Earth, Metal, Water, and Wood. There were many reasons to choose these five, but the main reason was that it was used in Chinese Medicine due to the belief that these elements existed in the body and reinforced or restricted one another.
The Reincarnator's Tavern
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You're welcome. =)
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HxH: another kind of Zoldyck
Anime & Comics · Soul_Eater_0252
I just re-read the paragraph and it seems I missed the "of" between the ability and the character's name. This is what happens when you read stuff just before going to bed...
"Alright, for my first wish, I want 'The Visionary' of Gremmy Thoumeaux from bleach but adapted to the laws of my future world," Thomas declared seriously.
HxH: another kind of Zoldyck
Anime & Comics · Soul_Eater_0252
Why is he calling Alluka Nanika? Nanika is the name Killua gave to Alluka's alter ego and no one else calls Alluka that, and I'm pretty sure that Killua wouldn't tell anyone about Nanika either. As he didn't in canon.
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HxH: another kind of Zoldyck
Anime & Comics · Soul_Eater_0252
It's "Tekkai" not "Tenkkai".
"That was surely your Tenkkai?" Zeno declared, looking at his fist and me.
HxH: another kind of Zoldyck
Anime & Comics · Soul_Eater_0252
Why would he want to bring a character with him, is he gay? Unless you meant that he wanted said character's abilities...
"Alright, for my first wish, I want 'The Visionary' of Gremmy Thoumeaux from bleach but adapted to the laws of my future world," Thomas declared seriously.
HxH: another kind of Zoldyck
Anime & Comics · Soul_Eater_0252
No worries, take your time. Though it is nice to hear that the releases are gonna become quite a bit more frequent. =)
I notified my discord but forgot to do so here. Pollen is really bad where I am, so the chapter is gonna be delayed until I actually have the will and brainpower to write after work and social obligations. I think it'll only be a couple of day's delay. However, we are also soon hopefully going to two or three chapters a week.
This Isn't Canon! (Or that time I reincarnated into an AU-Naruto)
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Lol, no worries. =)
A shiver went down Tayuya's spine as she hurriedly nodded. "Yes Kimimaru-sama!" She could piss off Orochimaru. She could piss off Kabuto or Guren. But Kimimaru? 'Never!'
This Isn't Canon! (Or that time I reincarnated into an AU-Naruto)
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