Webnovel Author: JPNovelFan - Novel Collection

How about a Mass release? Please! 🤣

I’ve quite liked this recent arc. Wolfe the ambassador to other worlds and realms to better his home is a satisfying read.

Extremely satisfying and I can’t wait for more chapters honestly!

So satisfying! Love this dwarf dude. Bring him home to the forest haha.

I apologize for my initial rude tone. It definitely was rude mate. I forget we’re not casual buddies, and I think there’s definitely some entitlement on my end there that feels like I should get angry over feeling like I’m being insulted while reading a story that normally is ridiculously entertaining. I was a d!ck, that’s for sure. Sorry about that.

There’s one more non-privilege chapter haha! Keep reading! ☺️

Understandable. I could word myself more like a professional email if you’d prefer in future comments. And I referenced since the beast arc started he’s been belittling Kane the entire time (second paragraph first sentence). It’s just gotten worse in these last few Mellow Arc Chapters, (my first paragraph comment). If you want constructive criticism that’s less aggressive, I’ll give it to you. I think you’re doing a disservice to the character rid Kane and treating him like a simpleton, but at the same time, your audience, who is being told the story with Rui as the narrator. See, you use Rui as the narrator 90% of the time with no actual narrator most of the time. He is explaining everything to Kane, but at the same time us as the audience. When you belittle Kane, it’s as if you’re belittling the reader. It’s an unintended consequence, I’m sure, but one I don’t think you’ve realized is happening as the author. With my warmest regards,

I think me sticking around for nearly 2k chapters means I certainly enjoy the additional thought and depth to it that you imbue into the story. However, if that’s all you got from my comment, I highly suggest you reread what I wrote. The way your storytelling these beast arc chapters has developed FEELS as the READER to ME, like you’re just consistently treating Kane like an idiot and over elaborating endlessly with zero action and telling Kane that we can’t do anything until Rui finishes explaining things endlessly. The whole bit with Kane suggesting to tell The Doctor about their plans or involve him was now the second time he’s suggested speaking with the doctor, only to be shut down by Rui and treated like a simpleton for even suggesting the idea. Once again, that’s how it comes across to ME as the READER. A different perspective than yours. I would think this alternate perspective could help you in crafting future chapters so you can see how it comes across rather than just insulting me for thinking I don’t enjoy the complex and depth you add to the story by having Rui be so thoughtful. He can absolutely explain things and be thoughtful without belittling Kane constantly. THAT’S my point.

I’m fully aware of them, but it feels sacrilegious to have them included with near zero reaction from an Earthling like Rui.

Great early release, but I have to say, this whole mellow arc is a TON of yapping about Rui:“ok here is what we will do.” Kane:“Why does that work?” Rui:“Because I said so and I’m so intelligent for your pea sized brain.” Kane: “Can we do it this way then?” Rui: “No sorry, but your brain is still so small and you know nothing Kane. We can’t even start our plan that I’ve been rambling about yet because I’m not finished talking.” Kane:“Are you done talking yet?” Rui: “How many times do I have to tell you Kane, you aren’t seeing everything because you’re just so small brained. We definitely can’t start yet because I’m not finished talking. You don’t understand at all.” Kane: “wow Rui sure is emotionless but at least he loves martial arts, teehee that’s my friend alright!” This is what it’s felt like reading the beast domain chapters so far, with the exception of the mental torture chapters. Really disliking it. Please change to more DOING instead of YAPPING.

Idk how I feel about you adding angels as “beasts” to the story. :/