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Awful cringe chapter

I would like to keep with the main characters with kingdom developement :)

The stats part does not make that much sense. There should be a difference. 15 levels x2 stats are 30 more strength.

You mention he didn’t want to kill the king because he forgets it’s a game all the time… so this time he want to kill all and changes his view in les than 24h? 2 chapters???

If the spirit of the kingdom appeared when praying to save an elf in the kingdom, the king, why aren’t the concubines given the same option?

How many times are her looks going to be mentioned? Yes, green eyes, blond hair, looks like a fairy…is it for word count?

Because even though you have written him as always being careful, he is risking it by getting cursed on purpose. He could instead get his memories back, less risky and since it was information maybe related to the development of the world he is at, definitely indispensable.

this was not a chapter...it was complete filler.

This last chapters are way to forced.

He is a gnome, low heath and a glass canon. On the other side our MC has quite an amazing DPS, so that it’s not a really valid reason. It’s the same as the king, you need an antagonist, but since you made them quite hateful, the reasons for allowing them to live are not enough to push through logic.

After everything he was told, I see no reason why the MC will stop the death of the king. Bad to his new family, bad for the kingdom, bad for him. Could you please explain author?

How can he equip anything if he doesn’t have the necessary stats that are required to equip it?

I’m really liking the novel…but I don’t understand this chapter at all. You are saying that 2 booklets of outdated skill to increase mana reg (that I’m sure asking their parents would have helped) cost the same (actually more) of 5 chances that give you in cases 50% in others lower probability of having more affinity? I don’t think it’s a good trade at all.

How does hammer have the suits made if the twins didn’t allow Rhodes to take the suit to the us Army?

Great chapter. BTW, will the mass release happen?

Every time a mass release or catching up with chapters is coming…bam! No more chapters for a while.

How are they evolving with an attack? Don’t they have to consume part of the evolved to gain its characteristics?

The same with moving around London by himself.