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I didn't know that this is author self help and motivation forum site.I will keep that in mind.and what do you mean by keeps tracks of all characters ?according to the author himself the mc first army college was going to be getting applications from the " whole of human race "so why are the only two previous guys pitted against the mc once more.you're shaming me bcos i gave my opinion ??I say . you and cronies can fuck the right off ,,🖕

dropped after chapter 131.author seems to forget things intentionally .some times the Mc is all knowledgeable .sometimes mc doesn't know the basic of things.dropped because the author tried to insert previous characters into the story out of nowhere.oh if u have plotholes one time ,I can understand but repeating the same mistakes a number times even when you have an audience giving u reviews of your work is unprofessional .had a lot of hopes for this one. but when illogical straits keep on stacking i can't continue this isnt the first popular novel I have dropped bcos of this detail.

i have decided to drop this novel at chapter 189 the world building is too shallow plot coincidences are not explained properly and used however loopholes not covered properly the traits of the mc are questionable

i haven't read far enough to rate any stars ,I dropped this novel by the first 5-6 chapters because I couldn't agree with how the story was portrayed ,there was too much missing information abou the mc. him being chosen by the god max makes no sense. the rebirth cannon is such a childish concept. the constant mention of erotic teasing is annoying do this read any novel, if start question the authors writing from the get go ,the novel isn't for you .