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of her* beloved husband
She sighed and wondered why Vina painted her daughter black to all of them, she called her daughter a nuisance, when in fact the girl was very kind and sweet, and despite how young she was Vina wanted to sacrifice Khalilah instead; Rose-Anne shook her head, Khalilah reminded her of my beloved husband, he was calm and sweet just like the girl.
Fated to the King of Death
Fantasy · DanitaMimi
You’ve mixed first person and third person’s POV.
Cherry, the housekeeper showed Khalilah to her room and she was also thoughtful enough to help her unpack my bags.
Fated to the King of Death
Fantasy · DanitaMimi
her* bags
Cherry, the housekeeper showed Khalilah to her room and she was also thoughtful enough to help her unpack my bags.
Fated to the King of Death
Fantasy · DanitaMimi
she pushed*
Sunlight streams into the room to remind Khalilah Earhart that it is morning already, she pushes the comforter away from her body, because nothing about it was comforting her anyway. She couldn't sleep a wink in the previous night; after hearing that she would go and live with her grandmother starting today.
Fated to the King of Death
Fantasy · DanitaMimi
it was* morning
Sunlight streams into the room to remind Khalilah Earhart that it is morning already, she pushes the comforter away from her body, because nothing about it was comforting her anyway. She couldn't sleep a wink in the previous night; after hearing that she would go and live with her grandmother starting today.
Fated to the King of Death
Fantasy · DanitaMimi
Sunlight streamed*
Sunlight streams into the room to remind Khalilah Earhart that it is morning already, she pushes the comforter away from her body, because nothing about it was comforting her anyway. She couldn't sleep a wink in the previous night; after hearing that she would go and live with her grandmother starting today.
Fated to the King of Death
Fantasy · DanitaMimi
pathetic self*
According to the news she heard, Mrs. Rose-Anne Earhart is very lonely and she would need the company of a family member, so her mother volunteered to make Khalilah go there instead. Even though she is just an awkward teenager, who can't even help her pathetic herself; Khalilah knew she was pretty much useless, so sending her there is like a total waste of time… especially since she didn't get along with any of her family members, but at least Grandma was nice, it is Grand-uncle Leo that isn't.
Fated to the King of Death
Fantasy · DanitaMimi
warped*
The piece fell into the blue brilliant portal and in a flash the warpped space in the middle of air closed up and with it gone was the only chance this humanity held against him.
The Death Collector
Fantasy · AkumaQuil
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 56 Married couple!
Beauty and the Immortal: It started with a dig
Fantasy · ash_knight17
extinction*, because*
Even if it meant the near extnction of her own bloodline for only god knows how many generations. She knew that becasue she has seen it with her own eyes, the future that meant not only her but also her kins of kins ending up in blood and ruins.
The Death Collector
Fantasy · AkumaQuil
entire* human race
But even then, the seer held no regret in her heart as she knew what she had taken was the only thing that stood between the doom and salvation of the emtire human race.
The Death Collector
Fantasy · AkumaQuil
ancestors*? or do you mean a woman ancestor ~ ancentress?
She began to pick up pace until she was sprinting with all her might as soon as the safety of her cottage came into sight. The exertion would later show itself with aches and bruises on her skin but she knew the discomfort won't even get enough time show itself as she soon will join her ancesters because what she had done.
The Death Collector
Fantasy · AkumaQuil
its* presence (the storm’s presence ~ not “it is presence”, as it’s is not a pronoun.)
The storm finally began to show it's presence as it started to drop little droplets of water from behind the curtain of dark dense clouds that shrouded the entire twilight skies that day in the village.
The Death Collector
Fantasy · AkumaQuil
The* Duke
A wide grin tugged on Faye's lips at the scene of her stepsister's fit of rage and the worry it was causing the Baron. the Duke was certainly winning points in her eyes right now for ignoring Alice's overtly repulsive advances. Conceivably, he might not be as bad as she first perceived. Faye knew it would not be advantageous for the Baron to start a squabble with the Duke. It wouldn't be a battle he could win.
The Dragon's Fated Bride
Fantasy · The_Sweet_Sparrow
"Get away from me, filthy slut."
The Dragon's Fated Bride
Fantasy · The_Sweet_Sparrow
on* a king’s accord
Now here Faye stood, On a king's accord. Being sold like common goods to the Duke in exchange for erasing the family's debts, and giving them a meager monthly stipend to support the indigent Barron and his heathen brood.
The Dragon's Fated Bride
Fantasy · The_Sweet_Sparrow
This one with “horse’s hooves” is correct as you formed the possessive form of the noun ‘horse’ showing OWNERSHIP of the hooves.
She focused on the sound of the horse's hooves, getting heavier and louder as they approached the Wintershold estate. Inside her soul, she felt a chill, as if the sound of her impending doom was drawing nearer.
The Dragon's Fated Bride
Fantasy · The_Sweet_Sparrow
horses* and knights* (we don’t form the plural form of nouns with apostrophes)
"I see horse's and knight's coming down the carriage path."
The Dragon's Fated Bride
Fantasy · The_Sweet_Sparrow
Who is Shidong? Is Chaoyang and Shidong the same person? 🫤🤨
ch 0 5 Chapter 4 The City of Wishing Power
Mystery Paradise: Wishing Power Demon
Fantasy · Second Eye