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The Virtual Berserker Ape can have emotion really....it just flinch. HOWWWWWWW

So much of grammatical mistakes.... it's so difficult to read.

Zangzhou, jingzhou, cangzhou, quingzhou......give some common name for universities to remember...... it's so confusing

I think the evolution procedure become very simple. He should make the materials as concoction. There should be a chance of failure while making concoction for every evolution so that this novel shouldn't look so easy. Every higher evolution, the rate of failure should be high so that it balance the whole novel. Strict mental power should required for making medicine so that the MC also improve his training. It was just my suggestion. And if you want to add game type element where you can add materials in the system window and get solution prepared itself with chances of failure with every higher level than it would be good.

Why some of the universities name are so similar.... it's confusing. please have some simple name which is easy to remember.

I have read about spirit stone in so many novels but this is the first time someone trying to do experiment on one...

As everyone is saying that the MC is getting everything easily, but I think it's due to his luck and luck is one type if strength. And I don't think he I'll get the free things all the time. So please give the novel some more time may be it I'll going to be more interesting.

story is very good till now. the only Itsy bitsy thing that make me sour is the grammar which makes the sentence incomplete.

Author can you use other synonym for spasm like twitch. It's boring reading the same word so many time. And why this novel revolve around sex, verginity, girl. I mean every teenage who cross 18 are desperate for sex or what. And do girls are so easy that they choose guys only with power n wealth. Don't make this novel so materialistic. A good novel can teach us moral values also. Respect women, don't show women as commodity which can be get if ur rich and famous, this is my humble request. Focus more on moral relationship...blood sister, adopted sister are same they will always be sister don't give immoral ideas to people.

The story started good but after 2 3 chapter the story is becoming weirder and weirder. People are jealous of seeing brother with his sister. Parents are trying to search girl for him on his birthday cause he became *****. I mean in which country this things happen. It so weird.