I have read ALOT... Now attempting a book, give it a read and tear me a new one with criticism
2019-02-16 เข้าร่วมแล้ว United States
"Alright, how many puppets do you need?" I asked.
Eastern · Biako
Use an Ai to generate something roughly like what your invisioning. Then it’s free
No one could hear the conversation, and Khan's face was as impenetrable as always. Monica also retained her elegant façade, but her mind thanked her dark skin for hiding the slight blush rising to her cheeks.
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
I think I’ve written like 3+ reviews myself. I’ll refrain for doing another for a while longer. Are you able to edit author notes in earlier already posted chapters? Maybe it’s worth adding notes like this to a random assortment of chapters earlier in the book
ch 752 Steam City
Eastern · Biako
Lith is a count now though… just no lands
"I mean, think about it. The woman who becomes Lith's wife will have the influence of a Magus, the standing on the Royal Court of a Baroness, and control over the colonization of Jiera.
Fantasy · Legion20
Just imagining him using a gas mask in a sealed room with a lot of vents so he doesn’t pass out and die before slowly recorking the bottle of booze 🥃 Raaz lookin like a drug chemist but just makin spiked tea
Once she was done, Raaz prepared for her a strong tea made even stronger by a few drops of Red Dragon, a liquor meant to intoxicate even Divine Beasts. He sweetened it with plenty of honey, just like Solus liked it.
Fantasy · Legion20
There was actually a seventh color among Elina-Mogar's hair but Solus couldn't focus on it. The only thing she knew was that it wasn't emerald green.
Fantasy · Legion20
Someone make an AI generation of him and reply it to me
Despite his unkempt appearance, Ryman's emerald eyes lit up with joy at the sight of his friends and he welcomed them with a warm smile.
Fantasy · Legion20
Why not bring the whole team? Maybe a couple eldritches too…
"Because if Windfell and his accomplices are watching us, they might lure him into a trap as well." Dawn replied from Nyka's mouth. "Remember that they don't care about which one between Verhen and Solus they kill.
Fantasy · Legion20
With an internal sigh, I trigger the healing gland once again. At this rate, it'll take a few days to put these fires out, then I can start to properly regenerate. Rammon the Phoenix of Light. He's a tough customer, but I have to thank him. By holding back, he literally saved my life.
Fantasy · RinoZ
O gawd, dude is like 50m tall and I suspect just like Liths blood, once it leaves his body it reverts to normal size. So if he doesn’t neutralize his ‘release’ any non divine beast is likely to explode or get rocket launched off his d**k
"An authentic uniform of the White Griffon academy." Kamila panted, eager to resume their conversation. "I noticed that you still have your Professor robe and I'm planning to be a really naughty student."
Fantasy · Legion20
Just thought of it… technically if moron wears sandals he could move his eye to his foot and see up skirts all day… knowing him I’m sure he did 🤣
"Eyes up here. All of them, smartass."
Fantasy · Legion20
wtf dude, I’d downvote if possible
He wanted to cry, but Salaark had warned him not to and showed him her Pits of Agony.
Fantasy · Legion20
Doesn’t sound like she’s an unfeeling machine like her ancestor though.
With Thrud dead, Jirni's rage was gone. Without her rage, she was empty, ready to be filled with more pain from Phloria's absence. Jirni still had lots of plans and schemes, but no will to enact a single step of any of them.
Fantasy · Legion20
New thought after rereading… After the tower is fully healed I think he might resurrect Menadion
"Valeron was a white core and becoming one of your Demons would give him a black core." Tyris replied. "If he manages to fuse them, he might not need your assistance to stay here anymore."
Fantasy · Legion20
You and me both Razz
Raaz clenched his hands and gritted his teeth. His trauma had been reopened by Phloria's death but it couldn't hold a candle to the rage he felt.
Fantasy · Legion20
I’m back! Got myself full privvy again. Keep it up Baiko
ch 747 Reward and Warning
Eastern · Biako
I mean… how big was King Kong supposed to be? Tiny is giving him a run for his money. At this rate, he'll be smacking over the empire state building with one hand in a couple of evolutions!
Chrysalis
Fantasy · RinoZ